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Did you ever have one of those days

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Mrs. KT
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Hello Cindy,
Well, as a Detroit Tigers' fan, I can relate! Only...it's been a long time since...well, you know... :) But I loved baseball as a kid as I was my dad's only son. Fine sentiments!

Thank you for sharing!
And I miss apple pie, too!

Take Care
diane


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Diane, thank you for your review!
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We are all missing out on a lot these days, and your poem - in so few words - describes what we miss so well. But hey, to "catch" a world series ball and DROP IT?? My goodness...SHAME SHAME SHAME lol! I'd cry too if I were his son hahaha. Still n all, you turned out a beauty in that restricted form of Homonym, and I hope it bears the winner's badge after the votes are in! Good luck xoxo


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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for your well wishes!
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This is a clever entry for the 1 - 10 -1 Homonym contest. You chose unusual and fun words to play with and wrapped them up with a favorite subject and great presentation. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you!

reply by Minglement on 09-Apr-2020
    My pleasure - take care :)
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a very good 1 - 10 - 1 Homonym poem writing prompt entry. That picture says it all!

I think we all miss"baseball, the American way, and apple pie." Well, at the moment someone can make an apple pie and fulfill at least one of the three hankerings...


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Rebecca, thank you.
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I like your homonym poem and the picture is perfect. What came first, the picture or the poem? You did a great job and I saw no errors. Stay well. Shirley


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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Shirley, thank you for your critique.
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-Great image and
presentation, Cindy.
-I miss baseball, too,
only it is the Phillies for us!
-Good homonyms and
syllable count.
-I love the question, too!
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Pam. I appreciate you review!
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LOL!! That's a great one, Cindy -- love this one because it's just darn funny especially with your chosen pic! ;) :) Thanx for smile, my lady, and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Yvette, thank you for your nice review.
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While I don't have an interest in baseball, nor is it a thing where I'm from, this short poem was an enjoyable read. You expressed emotions in a limited space which doesn't always work. Nice job!


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the nice review.
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pharp
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Cindy,

This is just great, I love the artwork and the words chosen are perfect.
This really could be a winner my friend. Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest.



 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Portia, for your critique and well wishes!
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile Cindy and I liked your presentation here, the photo and your words are magical and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Dolly, thank you for your nice review, and the well wishes!
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