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a 3-6-9

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Shawn Luther
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The first stanza is beautiful in its honesty, it really struck a chord with me. The commentary on our current situation, and the return of normalcy in the future are also spot on.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Shawn
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Kathleen S.
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This poem is very positive - a hope for the future in which we are no longer thinking of being isolated away from society and constantly indoors. (more than say outdoor) Well done. The picture expresses your thoughts as well.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Kathleen, for the kind review.

reply by Kathleen S. on 27-Apr-2020
    You're welcome.
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Tremendous work Bill. You have captured today, tomorrow and the future in a short poem. Good work on 3-6-9 syllable counts across three stanzas. No edits or adjustments are necessary.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Lance, for the terrific review. Bill
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This is well done, Bill. It's witty, satirical, and spot on true. What is interesting to me is that TODAY sort of gets lost in your poem. That's exactly how it is, too. Never has it been harder to live in the moment.
Good job, Bill.


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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Debbie, for the insightful review.
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How we are living today we never thought of, wearing musk, at the threat of epidemic, locked down, staying at home doing facebook, hoping virus free tomorrow; well said, well done.


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    Thank you, ALD
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I really like the way in this poem you are constantly moving us through time. The way that this is mirrored through the three stanzas, which all start with a time phrase, contributes to the overall effect of the poem. Well done!


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    Thank you, Anya, for the nice review.
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A very well-written 3-6-9 poem. Our lives have never change as quickly as the last few months. Our hands are washed every half an hour or wiped with alcoholic sanitizer. We try not to touch our faces a very hard task.


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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thank you,Sandra.
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I like this Bill. What it was like, what is and what will it be like. I hope kids at least use their sleeves rather than their hands, but I think a new habit will have formed. We must be ready for the second wave if indeed it occurs. Well written!
Drew


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thanks, Drew, for giving this a look.
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You capture the essence of life these days for many. Just a touch of sardonic humor in the last two stanzas. And at the same time the whole poem is a social commentary that's quite accurate. Rod


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Rod.
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-Good artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-Good syllable count
and well written poem.
-I like you topic and the
progression with the time periods.
-Each one has very good detail
to show the differences in time.
-It will be so good when
things resemble what they used to be
or better!
-A good entry; good luck.


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thank you, Pam.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Apr-2020
    You are welcome, Bill.
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