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An observation I feel true; how about you?

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Rmocruz
 
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As a Never-Trumper I can certainly relate to this solidly rhymed profoundly truthful theme. You have got guts, be careful of the ignorant Trump Tribe.
I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020


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Sadly true. You've written a great little poem, outlining a sad truth in our country today. I loved the line about riding 'his pride with bent intent'.Take heart - election is coming soon.


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020


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When I finished reading this unusually short (for you) poem, I thought "Oh God, how true". Even though I'm Australian, I still read about and see the damage he is doing to your country, and what a buck-passer he is. If you stuff up, admit to it. But he's above all that apparently. Well said!


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


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Easy,
I love your poetry, it's true
But I think your words, a bit confused.
The man you speak, maybe short of tongue
But your allegations are falsely accused.

The real pests are the Democrats
They're known as public Phthirus
They, my friend, are the threat to life
They are man's deadly virus.

Thanks for sharing.



 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    First, I am or was a Regan Republican but voted for the man or woman based on facts. But your review enlightened me. I now think delusion is as contagious as CoVid-19. Even more reason to fear a blithering incompetent like Trump, who by the way, was a democrat until he wasn't. lol Thank you friend. ee

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    First, I am or was a Regan Republican but voted for the man or woman based on facts. But your review enlightened me. I now think delusion is as contagious as CoVid-19. Even more reason to fear a blithering incompetent like Trump, who by the way, was a democrat until he wasn't. lol Thank you friend. ee

reply by Lil' Mormon Boy on 08-Apr-2020
    Easy, You don't know how much I appreciate your correspondence. My mother always told me that I would argue the moon was made of green cheese.
    Keep Healthy!

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    And you also my brother. Take care. tom
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Ross E Silke
 
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Good job with this! I like the yellow on black. It rhymes smoothly and consistently. Good thought provoking ideas and complex choice of words. It sounds out well. Interesting and the author pays attention to detail.


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


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At last I came across a writer who bold enough to speak the truth about the president besides me. You captured my attention from the first line to the last ... like they do me many will read your poem but not promote your words which I feel is not fair.
No matter what I response to reader works from a dollar to two cent.

Thank you for sharing
Cookie


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


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I'm glad you wrote that, it is precisely how I feel. As an Australian, I feel grossly unqualified to judge the man as President. As a human being, I find his attitude so self-serving. I have no doubt however he will later this year be given a second term and that frightens me.


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


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Easy Everett,

I do agree there is a great gulf between what we might consider great men of honor and our current president. Pride comes before the fall, but I'm not sure he would recognize it when it comes.

Patricia


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020


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Yes, pride with no shame is a curse that many men are able to use to benefit others, but the foundation is corrupt. In the end, it will come to light and tarnish reputations.


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020


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joycetreasures
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Hello again Easyeverett,

This poem is how I feel most of the time about the leader of the free world. You were able to capture it in 8 lines. WOW. Nicely done and great rhyming of your words. I pray for him every day. Great job on your poem. I like your title also. Thanks. Happy writing:-)


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Hi Joyce. You and I share the same feelings about
    this aberrant anomaly called Trump. Thank you so
    much for this symbiotic review. Most honored friend. ee

reply by joycetreasures on 08-Apr-2020
    You are so welcome.
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