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Morning Meditations


Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Heavenly Hand"

This is a book of short morning meditations.

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Thank you for this comforting poem. It is much needed at this time for all of us and for those who don't know the Lord's salvation, a timely word. Faith comes by hearing the good news. Sending you my best today as always and six stars with your entry. Happy Easter, Bill!
Sally xo


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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much for the six stars and the encouraging review!
    Bill

reply by Sally Law on 14-Apr-2020
    You are most welcome, Bill. Sal :)
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Bill, you have penned a beautiful statement of faith in this sonnet. Yoy well describe His holy attributes and your faith in spite of our current pandemic. Well done.


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks and happy Easter! Bill

reply by Minglement on 11-Apr-2020
    You're welcome. Happy Easter, Bill - Marcia

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Hello Bill. Excellent sonnet. Your message reflects the Gospel and it's story of redemption sent by God for His creation. This is well written and gives the reader a vision of the Gospel message.

Good luck in the contest.

Robert


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks, Robert, happy Easter! Bill

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 10-Apr-2020
    You're welcome.
    Happy Easter to you Bill.
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These are reassuring words in this time of crisis. You remind us that Christ sacrificed his life that others might have salvation. In the weeks that we've been dealing with the coronavirus, He has been there to offer comfort and reassurance. Beautifully written sonnet. judi


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks and happy Easter! Bill

reply by judiverse on 10-Apr-2020
    You're welcome. It's certainly going to be different this year. judi
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My last six for the week goes to this lovely sonnet. Not only is it well written and in excellent sonnet form, it combines a timely message of faith with the celebration of Easter. This is a keeper.


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks and happy Easter! Bill
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Beautiful sonnet offering, Bill -- such a reassuring message and testimony of your faith all in one! ;) I would only suggest popping in there and adding a space between your stanzas (for appearances and ease of following your scheme... feel free to ignore). Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks for the suggestion and happy Easter! Bill
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
Your words touched my heart and soul in fact it gave me a chill
no matter what happen it will in the hands of the Lord.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Thanks and happy Easter! Bill

reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 11-Apr-2020
    Your welcome, same to you.
    Cookie
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Hello Bill,
This a lovely poem of love and all the God sacrifice for us thousands of years ago. He is an awesome creator and knows all. He loves us endlessly and bountifully. Yes, because of His love for us, we are free. Free to serve Him with any boundaries. With this virus, we feel helpless sometimes. But, if we simply call on His son for protection, we will be fine. Philippians 4:6-7 6 "Do not be anxious about anything, but in every situation, by prayer and petition, with thanksgiving, present your requests to God. And the peace of God, which transcends all understanding, will guard your hearts and your minds in Christ Jesus. This is a lovely poem from your heart. Great rhyming and structurally written. No errors I saw. Good job and God bless you richly. Happy writing:-)



 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Thanks and happy Easter! Bill

reply by joycetreasures on 11-Apr-2020
    You are welcome. Happy Easter.
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Important, heartfelt message on today's issue, the over bearing virus.
just a thought though, although I do not write in the sonnet style, does it not have the 3 distinct verses of 4 lines each and the last verse in 2 lines? Just thought I'd ask.

lulube


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Thanks and happy Easter! Bill

reply by Lulube on 12-Apr-2020
    ditto to you


    lulube
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A very well-written sonnet about the heavenly hands if God that is always there to protect us from harm wherever we are, we can just belief and pray in faith for His caring live and comforting hands.


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Thanks and happy Easter! Bill
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