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An artful mix of poetic forms.

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Gail Denham
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I pray for this passion in writing - for the conviction that my words may make a difference to someone - give hope - demonstrate that God is in control and that He loves us.
good poem


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    You have homed in on what it really means, Gail, and I think it is showing just by writing this reply. Thank you so much for a super review. I hope you are staying safe and well. Smiles, Janet
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Wow! you have written this beautifully, experience, time, and circumstance do encourage the artist of all forms, an excellent read and yes passion is the reason for doing....thank you for sharing****kahpot


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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    I appreciate your review on this very much, my friend. Thank you for your kind comments! --Janet
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A most intuitive and profoundly relay of comparisons and contrasts
on creativity and reminder how key and influential the role of
passion and our emotions play in every aspect of the creative
endeavor, whether in personal avocations, or overall effects of
a whole panorama of life and livings contingencies and commitments.
A most astounding write, truly appreciated, thanks for sharing.
Best wishes always,
Ronni


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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much, Ronni. I'm happy to know you appreciated this posting. You have uplifted my evening, for sure! Smiles, Janet
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I enjoyed this chapter of your book, written with passion as it artfully describes passion...a state that is lacking these days, as we all stiffly get through each stifled day locked inside. But, we can read poetry such as this and feel freed. We can WRITE poetry like this (maybe lol) and feel released. Yes, passion needs to fuel our days, rather than apathy and acceptance. Thank you for sharing such art, and such passion, with us today!


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    I don't think you have any problem at all in the artistic/creativity department, my friend. :-) Your uplifting review and comments are truly heartwarming. Thank you so much!

reply by Gypsymooncat on 09-Apr-2020
    No probs, and thank YOU for your comments xo
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The author's words are joyous, interesting and creative. I enjoyed
the read of this poem. I pondered on the passion it takes to write
and how it gives us the drive to write more. The poem flows and
connects well. Hope you are doing well. Happy Easter!.....Maria


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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this, Maria. I think poets, especially, have a lot of passion because there is a great need to express all aspects of life. Thank you so much for your lovely review! --Janet
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A very well-written poem about finding passion in everything we like to do or otherwise it is no point in wasting time to do it when we have no passion for doing it.


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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you for reading this and sharing your thoughts, Sandra. It's sad to think that some people have practically given up on life, especially when there is so much to appreciate. They need to be reading your morning poems...that would cheer them up and help them want to do positive things. Stay safe!
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What a wonderful idea, Janet. Your poem is written well and I like your idea. Creativity has no bounds. I am an artist and like the medium of collage. Best of luck with your book. I see this is the Introduction. Marilyn


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    I'm very happy that you like this idea, Marilyn. It's exciting to know that you actually work on real collage projects and not just virtual ones. I hope you like the chapters I'll be posting. One thing with physical collages is the texture factor that isn't available when a replication is viewed on a computer screen. I'm hoping that readers will have active imaginations. lol Thank you so much for this lovely review. Smiles, Janet

reply by BeasPeas on 09-Apr-2020
    We have quite a few artists here on the site, Janet. I think several also post on FanArt, too. Marilyn

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    I'm fans with a few of them and I love seeing their work. --Janet
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Outstanding poetry Janet. I like the lilt-like sound of it all especially these lines of course:

"For the poet, it is manifested in written lines
sharing the universal essence of a person's
heart and soul."

Great writing my friend. Bless you and take care. :) Bob


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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    I'm so glad you connect with this, Bob. You write outstanding reviews, and I truly appreciate them! Big smiles, Janet

reply by Mastery on 08-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much Janet. X Bob
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Artist, composer, poet - all are indeed fueled by passion from their own persepctives. And that is what makes each of their creations unique. Whether or not anyone else appreciates, understands or likes the piece matters not. It is important only that you express your feelings through your art - fulfilling your dreams.


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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    I understand exactly what you've saying and agree completely. The creative force within an artist needs to find an outlet, even if we are the only one ever to be aware of the experience of fulfilling it in a way that brings a smile to our faces upon completion. Thank you greatly for this lovely review.
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Introduction
by Spangle


Free verse and Japanese poetry are my favorite. I write a lot of classic and contemporary haiku but I love tanka too. It's all imagistic poetry. I like, introduction, I will have to check your other chapters. Well done!


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for this supportive review. I truly appreciate your comments. Smiles, Janet
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