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Heroes in the Family


Musings

  18 total reviews 
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Joan E.
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I appreciate your sharing the wise quote by Stephen King, especially during these challenging times when togetherness is very important. Thank you for your tribute to your unsung-hero siblings. I hope can find as satisfying a job as theirs. Best wishes- Joan


 Comment Written 16-May-2020



reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Hi Joan,
    Thanks for going back and reading this. Yes, I am proud of my family and all their contributions. I just hope they all stay safe.
    Debi
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Hello w.j.debi
Why apologize for the space I noticed one thing I liked was it made me and ponder, and ask myself, "What in the world were you deciphering?"
Gert


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Hi Gert,
    Thank you for the kind words and for going back to review this one.
    I appreciate you taking the time to read and to give such a kind review.
    Debi

reply by Gert sherwood on 12-May-2020
    Hello debi
    My goodness you are so welcome. It was my pleasure to read your excellent post-
    ' Heroes in the Family'
    Gert

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Wow! Your brothers and sister are the unsung heroes of this unprecedented time in our history. The text your brother sent is worthy of printing out and pasting on the refrigerator.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Hi Shari,
    Thank you for the excellent review and your comments about the unsung heroes. I agree about the text my brother sent.
    Sorry for the delay in responding. It's been a crazy week.
    Debi
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lance michaels
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This is a wonderful tribute to your siblings and the important work they do. And you are right about the postal workers, they don't get enough credit for getting our mail to us every day.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the excellent review and comments about the postal workers. You are so right.
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I really enjoyed this piece. Right now people are seeing the unsung heroes, and your siblings are indeed heroes. It is also very true that most people are looking for the bright side. I am glad you found yours. Keep well.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your excellent review and comments about the unsung heroes. Keep looking on the bright side. Stay safe.
    Debi
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Hi, Debi

Thank you so much for sharing your 'musings'. You certainly have a very heroic, hard-working and generous family. That is a true blessing, and I'm glad to learn a little more about them.

Bev


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Hi Bev,
    Thank you so much for the six stars and the wonderful comments about my musings. I am proud of my family.
    Sorry for the delayed response. Life has been crazy this week.
    Debi

reply by Writingfundimension on 17-Apr-2020
    Understood! You're very welcome, Debi. :) Bev
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These things are worthwhile musings. We certainly owe a lot to those who are in the think of things. I have a nurse daughter who is one of them. I also feel very bad for those who have lost their jobs wondering what happens next and will there be funds there to carry them through. Like you I'm thankful I've been given time to write by being forced to stay home. I really like the King quote and I also like the quote your brother sent. I can understand that thinking.
Beth


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Hi Beth,
    Thanks for the wonderful review and your comments about our heroes. Thank your daughter for me. Keep writing. I apologies for the delay in responding. Life was a little crazy this past week at my house.
    Debi
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I think your piece captures that's sense of contrast between our feelings at present; fear at having no income, and fear at having to go to work in uncertain circumstances. I work in a supermarket so I know the feeling. What makes your piece is this personal approach; telling us the details of your brothers' work, how they have to go in, what they do, how they suit up in those hazmat suits and get mistaken for doctors. That last image is kind of transcendent; we see in real terms how important these people who are often taken for granted really are. estory


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Hi estory,
    Thank you for the analysis and the wonderful comments. It is a strange time for certain, and I do appreciate everyone who is helping things stay as normal as possible. Thank You for keeping the supermarket open, and food and supplies available.
    Debi
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This was a very sweet story. You have spoke about the importance of jobs that may have been underestimated in the past. We must never forget these events and appreciate them forever.


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Hi Bichon,
    Thank you for the encouraging comments about the story and about those jobs we take for granted. These are strange times for certain.
    Debi
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-I appreciate your sharing your
thoughts about you and your siblings, Debi.
-I appreciate the quote at the beginning, too.
-Thanks for sharing their backgrounds
and the pride they take in their work,
especially in the midst of this horrible situation.
-Your brother had a very good quote, too.
-Sorry to hear you are unemployed, but
I hope that changes once we get
beyond this ordeal.


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments. I'm doing okay. I am actually feeling blessed I don't have to go to work at the moment and face all those germs. LOL. I appreciate the good wishes.

reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Apr-2020
    You are very welcome, Debi. It's good to have a positive attitude.
    I appreciate your reply.
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