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Little Miss Smokey


Animal Crackers - Nursery Rhyme Pets

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I enjoyed your nursery rhyme based on your own pets and the well-know Miss Muffet rhyme. I am sorry you lost Miss Smokey and that Miss Tipsy seems bored. Take good care of yourself- Joan


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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Sandra, This is a very cute and very lovely nursery rhyme about two of your little animals. You used very good descriptive words and lovely picture of them. I am so sorry Miss Smokey died. We had a cat, Sassy, that died from cancer too. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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Haha what a fun club post, Sandra. I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is perfect for your choice of nursery rhymes. Your lines flow well and mimic the original. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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How fun is this one? I really enjoyed the mimicry of Little Miss Muffet as you had your cats singing karaoke. This is a very enjoyable read, Sandra. Well done.

Melissa


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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You've captured the rhythm of Miss Muffet well as the base for your poem with Miss Smokey and Miss Tipsy. Cute picture of this pair of pets to go with your poem,
cheers valda


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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Which one is Miss Smokey and Miss Tipsy? I love that picture and the little nursery rhyme. In terms of behavior, I'm betting it's the cat that walks away disgusted. Poor Miss Tipsy is missing Miss Smokey.


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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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This is brilliant, Sandra. You could do a whole series on this type of format and make something really interesting and fun too.

Miss Smokey doesn't seem much impressed by Miss Tipsy, though so perhaps she is a teatotaller? lol

Great job and a most enjoyable read.

Gloria


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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Hahaha... no one likes to be upstaged at karaoke - i enjoyed this dog and cat rivalry. What a lovely photo to accompany it. Clever idea to be triggered by the nursery rhyme.


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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Great accompanying artwork choice. And what is this story... I like how you personified the cat and dog to be real people. We are all snobs in our own right. Nice work. Good luck :)


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day, and a wonderful week,
    Sandra.
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Awe poor miss tipsy!!!! This is really cute. You did such a good job capturing the personalities of the animals in very few lines! I enjoyed this and I know a child would love it. Great job!


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020



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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great weekend,
    Sandra
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