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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Jehovah-Rapha"

Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians

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nancyjam
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this is such a thoughtful beautiful and faith-filled prayer. Yes, faith in
God will give us strength to keep going.
I join you in prayers for all her on Fanstory and their families.
May you have a blessed Easter, Be safe.
Nancy


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Nancy,

    Blessings to you on this Easter Sunday.
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. They are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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RShipp
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My heart is touched by your heart's compassion and yearnings for mercy.

God is indeed Jehovah-Rapha.

A wonderful prayer.

Be blessed on this special day.


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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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Drew Delaney
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I agree in the Name of Jesus, and claim the promises that You will never leave us nor forsake us. I agree with Portia for the others she has mentioned in her prayer.


How is your son, Portia?
Drew xx


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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Thanks for touching and agreeing in the Name of Jesus.
    Bless you my friend.
    My son is still going through some aches and pain, but his breathing is getting better. Thanks so much for asking and for your prayers and kindness. Sending love your way on this Resurrection Sunday.
    Hugs...Portia
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So many have been affected and will be affected by this. We have the have a safe place to turn to when times are uncertain and we find ourselves questioning. This is a good reminder of a good place to turn to. Great job


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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Sandra du Plessis
 
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A very well-written heartfelt poem/prayer for everyone to be careful and to stay safe in the path of the invisible threat. Our hearts and prayers with everyone who are at risk.


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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Sandra,

    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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Hi Portia, I didn't know about Miss Cookie,
I will put her in my prayers as well...as I do pray every night for God to protect and heal all over the world...
I love your beautiful poems for FanStory my sweet friend...
and your picture is stunning...so very nicely written sweet girl...God Bless...stay safe...love you....Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Linda,

    Thanks s much for your review and more importantly your prayers.
    May God continue to keep you and your family in His loving care.
    Stay well.

    Hugs...Portia

reply by l.raven on 12-Apr-2020
    Hi Portia, your so welcome always...
    may God hold you tight in his hands
    protect you from all dangers...
    I hope you had a Blessed Easter Sunday...
    take care and be safe...God Be With You...love you...Linda xxoo
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Your prayer is truly beautiful and you have included very major areas that we need to continually bring before God. I prayed it in agreement with you.

Even though prayers aren't the same as stories or poems, I wanted to be thorough, so here are two small errors I am pointing out, if you choose to fix them:

In your 4th paragraph from the top, a comma is needed after the word "touch."

In the second-to-last paragraph, "maybe" should be two words, "may be."

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Your picture is beautiful, and inspiring to prayer in its images, scripture and words. Your Notes are also helpful.

Thank you for this loving and reverent supplication to Almighty God, in Jesus' Name. May He bless and protect you, your home and your family!


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Mary,

    Thanks so much for your review, comments and for bringing to my attention, the errors that need to be corrected.

    Blessings...Portia

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 14-Apr-2020
    You're very welcome, Portia. May God bless you too, and keep you and your family safe. - Mary Kay xoxo
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A very in depth prayer from the heart that's written well and presented eloquently. It hits home in all that it encompasses that needs to be prayed for in a compact written work. It explores each aspect of the global catastrophe needing God's intervention. Powerful and effective, a wonderful offering


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Ross,

    Thanks so much my friend for you review and comments, as always they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...

    Blessings...Portia
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Beautiful Miss Portia.
That is one good thing to come out
of all of this. I believe people
are turning back to God.
I wasn't aware that so many Fanstory families
had been affected. I need to read more.
Is your son better, I hope?
God bless you, Happy Easter...


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Judy,

    Thanks so much for your review, and six star rating.
    I appreciate your kindness and support.
    My son is still in recovery, no more fever, he is breathing better and still have a great deal of coughing. He is a lot better that he was, I give God all the praise.

    Hugs...Portia

reply by Irish Rain on 15-Apr-2020
    Yay!! I'm so glad he's better!!! Thank God!! Have a great week!!
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This poem - this prayer is the heart cry from all of us. I agree totally - and believe that as we seek God more - daily - often - and pray for our country, for our President to seek God's wisdom - we can also reach out to comfort and give hope, God's hope - to others.
What has happened with Dolly's family and Miss Cookie's - I hadn't heart. praying for them.


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Gail,

    Thanks so much for your review and comments.
    I just found out today that Miss Cookie sister passed on April 9th from Covid 19 and Dolly's had some members in her family to be stricken with the virus as well, they are recovering I believe. We must continue to uplift one another in prayer.

    Blessings...Portia
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