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real meaning of Easter

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He is indeed alive! This is the only part of what's considered Easter that we should be concerned about. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice comments. Blessings, Teri
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Happy Easter
by Teri7

Hello, Teri,

Is this a picture of you and your husband? It's such a beautiful picture and you look like a great match. You both have a kind smile. Happy Easter to you too. Great poem. Good syllable count. The connection between lines can be improved. The trick is to connect them grammatically, it really helps the flow.

The tomb is empty
because our Lord has risen-
Jesus is alive .... anyway...it's just an example.


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Thank you Gypsy for the nice review and help. That is a picture of Tom and myself. love and blessings, Teri
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The_Boy_Whodunnit
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Very simple, and short, but very effective as a poem. Just like the message you are sharing, I suppose. I think the picture works well, even if it was what was available. It shares the joy of what you have written about.


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the great review and very nice comments. May God bless you! Teri
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"Awake, awake, the Lord of light has cast a stone into the bowl of night." Thank you for your Easter message to all that will read it. Such a strange Easter this year, still we were able to watch on TV. Bless you both. Love, K.


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much K for the great review and very true comments. Seems nothing is as it was lately. Maybe we need to wake up and pay attention to what God is trying to say to us. love and blessings, Teri

reply by Aussie on 15-Apr-2020
    Teri, I believe we are in the last days. So, we look to Jesus for His love. XX K.
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The author's words are joyous, glorious and creative. The reader
found comfort in this short poem that gives hope. I love the
picture and it goes so well with this poem.
Hi Teri, hope you and your family had a wonderful Easter.....Maria


 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much Maria for this great review and very nice and kind comments. It was a nice and quiet Easter. I hope you had a good one too my friend. love, Teri
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Thanks for sharing this! Wow, love your picture! Now we know you. Yes, today we celebrate Jesus rising our of the tomb HE IS ALIVE!! Well said! This is truly inspirational and a beautiful reminder to us to embrace the risen Jesus who is alive today and forevermore. I can see him in my apt. after I read this; it invites Him in to our place as we read. Wonderful!!


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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice/true comments. He is with us and never leaves us! We are truly more blessed than we can ever imagine! Blessings, Teri
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Happy Easter
Nice photo of you husband and you. Thank you so much for reminding us that Our Lord was nailed to a cruel tree and died to forgive our sins.
Gert


 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much Gert for the great review and very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
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Hi Teri. I like this photo of you and Tom. Happy Easter. None of us could go to church, but we worshiped in our own way at home. Churches are getting very creative in this pandemic. Marilyn


 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Thanks Marilyn for the great review and comments. I missed going to our church, but we had a great time at home with preaching and communion in our home. The Lord is always with us and that is the great thing! love you! Teri
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Amen!! This reminded me of some of my favorite Easter Sunday hymns. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the way choruses really focus our worship services but Easter is one of those times when I miss those old hymns we sang all of my childhood. Of course this Easter was completely different as we had church on face book in our living room. It didn't matter God is still God and that tomb was still empty!!!


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Amen my friend! We listened to Dr. Charles Stanley and did communion in our living room also. God is with us wherever we are. And you are so right the tomb is still empty and Jesus Christ is alive! love and blessings, Teri
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Now that is a happy picture for a happy occasion. Had Jesus died that horrible death and had not risen, we would still be in our old sins. Him rising from the dead made it possible for salvation. Great post!


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 12-Apr-2020
    You are so welcome.
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