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Tanvi Pauddar
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Wow!!! Your poem was kind of funny, and I really enjoyed some humor. I also liked the picture. I goes well with your poem. The poem sounded kind of like a really short story, another thing I liked. Good luck in the contest!!


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a blessed Sunday.

    Blessings...

reply by Tanvi Pauddar on 19-Apr-2020
    You're welcome
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You're having lots of fun with this lottery--even in giving the day of Tom's death. One wonders if Wifey found the ticket after the exhumation. The note also made me chuckle. Rod


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
    Thank you kindly...
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Drew Delaney
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He lies/ Here lies
A fun epitaph that is witty! The only thing is that in 1926, there were no lotteries. It could be 2016, and still have the same effect. Nice work! Best wishes in the contest!
Drew


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2020


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    Drew,

    Thank you kindly for your review and for bringing the errors to my attention...
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