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Why Rus ?


If this doesn't kill ya, that will

  3 total reviews 
Comment by
Franklin Dillard
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I was a sailor. I knew many pretty boys who fit this category. One was left in Subic Bay, Philippines with a disease. so your poem is not too far fetched
Franklin Dillard
www.havepenwilltravel.co


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
    Thank you Franklin. I have never been a sailor but romanticized often about their lives. Thanks again and stay safe.
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Marjon van Bruggen
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Calle Romani, 14
 
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Oh Rus, just a bit of a too generous love life. And in Barcelona it finely happened: why did this stupid girl not stayed quietly at home, as all the other girls had to do? Then Rus may have made so many more girls happy in other harbors all over the world. But maybe it is for the best, Coronavirus is spread already everywhere.
Got me kind of smiling.


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
    :))) Its nice of you to see Rus's missionary zeal to make women happy. At least the Virus did not ask Why Rus ;) Thank you for the review Marjon.

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 18-Apr-2020
    Very welcome
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Anya Trofimova
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This is great and most definitely a topical poem! The rhyme scheme works brilliantly in this. Best of luck in the contest and well done on this excellent write!


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the feedback Anya. At least the Virus did not ask Why Rus ;)
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