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Soar With the Eagles


A dream of life.

  15 total reviews 
Comment by
Opal Rose
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An excellent lesson we all can take away from. I love the serene image you have chosen to accompany these powerful words. Thank you kindly for your reviews as well as becoming my first FS fan! Best of luck in your contests and all of your writing endeavors.

Sincerely signed,
Opal Rose


 Comment Written 18-May-2020



reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    That is a very nice review you have given me. Thank you for your words, I do appreciate their meaning. :)Ralf
    PS: Have you recently joined?

reply by Opal Rose on 18-May-2020
    You are most welcome Raffaelina! Yes, it is true. I am a fresh FanStory member. I have felt the warmest of welcomes thus far. Thank you for being a part of that reality for me! I joined the site only this past week. Your support means more than I can translate!

    -Opal Rose

reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    You will blossom in this environment. Welcome.

reply by Opal Rose on 18-May-2020
    Thank you so very much.
Comment by
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Bill Schott
 
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This senryu, Soar with the Eagles, has the right set up and suggests that when a goal is to be reached one needs to move to where it is attainable.


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your insight in this review.
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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

A fine entry for the
Write A Senryu writing prompt contest. It's a great topic and I like the presentation. Good syllable count. Good luck!


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the laudable review.
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Minglement
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I really enjoyed this humorous look at courage and the encouragement to strive for your goals. I always love a positive contest entry and this one has a bonus in the humorous twist. Good luck.


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your lively input in this review.

reply by Minglement on 30-Apr-2020
    You are most welcome. Take care :)
Comment by
Janice Canerdy
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THIS is what a senryu should be like. It is a clever, thought-provoking piece about people and their expectations. As a cautionary piece, it conveys a powerful message for the person who mistakenly thinks low standards can result in reaching high goals!


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    This is a very thoughtful review and I truly appreciate your input.
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Jannypan (Jan)
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No, work on making your dreams come true. Don't waste time on insignificant 'things'. Good job with the syllable count per line, Mystery Author. I rally like the chosen art. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank for your positive review. Always grateful.
Comment by
samandlancelot
Patricia
 
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I love your brilliant photo and color selection. When I read your senryu, I gasped at the profound meaning.

Exceptional entry for the senryu contest.

Patricia


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your laudable review. It is so encouraging.
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Amy Greta
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I love your senryu! I feel like making it into a poster and hanging it on the wall in my middle school classroom. Excellent advice and so true! Great choice of image as well:)


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for this positive review. This was advice I gave to my granddaughters.
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Y. M. Roger
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Unless, of course, you're building an empire of night clubs... ;) :) :) LOL! A wonderful senryu for the contest with a timeless message! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thanks, Yvette. That was my advice to my granddaughters.
Comment by
playinaround
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I love it! Just so clever with so few syllables. personally, I hoot with the owls. hahaha. Great writing and presentation. If this is in a contest, the best of luck to you!


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your input. LOL. I do too, but I'm too old to worry.
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