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This is a very moving piece of the reality you face and the strength you have to keep you family (all generations) happy and healthy! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
and hence they should be --> and, hence, they should be
stopped and I too hardly --> stopped, and I, too, hardly
I hardly have --> [you just used 'hardly'...perhaps try] I barely have
books.(I am not very comfortable when it comes to e-reading ) I miss --> books (I am not very comfortable when it comes to e-reading). I miss
for me but I --> for me, but I
health .I am asthmatic and my --> health. I am asthmatic, and my
regular in our meals --> regular ingredients in our meals OR regulars in our meals
posts in fanstory.(I don't write much even before Corona) After --> posts on FanStory (I didn't write much even before Corona). After
contest.And it was very easy to write ! --> contest. It was very easy to write!
whenever I like and wherever I like. --> whenever I liked and wherever I liked.
think ,"if only I could give her a hug".I have --> think,"If only I could give her a hug." [new paragraph starts here] I have
the covid tally -luckily the death tally --> the COVID tally - luckily the death count OR he COVID count - luckily the death tally
when I get up the first --> when I get up, the first
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
Thank you very much ,especially for the trouble you have taken to point out the mistakes.I am sorry for the late reply .This is the first time I am coming here in about 2 months.
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