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Mary Kay Bonfante
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A very different type of free verse poem -- unexpected in its expression of an extreme condition. Is it a feeling you're experiencing because of the quarantine, or a totally imaginary and hypothetical situation? Either way, you've described this experience very well.
This line is very good, and could apply to either possibility:
"And now I'll never know I do suppose
The world that might have been."


 Comment Written 06-May-2020



reply by the author on 06-May-2020
    Hi Mary Kay. It's a poem written in response to The Fabulous Free Verse Club, calling for a poem about a Time Freeze where everything stops except you. I complied to the event.

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 07-May-2020
    Then you did a great job of it! That clearly answers my question.
    Blessings,
    Mary Kay xoxo

reply by the author on 07-May-2020
    Thank you.

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 07-May-2020
    You're welcome, Raffaelina.
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Now, just stop and imagine you are a person that struggles with depression and other related mental issues... this is literally killing them from the inside. :( ;( A well-written offering for the contest with chilling truth within... ;) Thanx for sharing, Rafe! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 06-May-2020



reply by the author on 06-May-2020
    Eerie! Thanks for your review. Glad you stopped by. :)Ralf
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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I suppose this is a good summary of how most folks feel nowadays with the pandemic. It has become a lonely world. Books are your best friend right now. Well done!


 Comment Written 06-May-2020



reply by the author on 06-May-2020
    Thank you for your thoughtful review. Yes, books are always our best friends. Stay safe.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 06-May-2020
    Have a happy profitable day.
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I enjoyed your free verse for the challenge, Raff. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery. Readers are able to join you in this bizarre predicament of the world that is frozen in time.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 05-May-2020



reply by the author on 05-May-2020
    Thanks Jan. Kind words indeed. A very encouraging review.
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The picture of the inner workings of a timepiece are appropriate, and your poem is a vivid expression of the disbelief that many of us are feeling, as we contemplate a word stopped in its tracks. The fact that our world will be utterly different and we are helpless sits uncomfortably, when we are used to being able to make a difference in others' lives.


 Comment Written 05-May-2020



reply by the author on 05-May-2020
    Thank you for your in depth review. It is a strange world we are experiencing here.
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I think London is still busy to a certain extent, but none of the shops are open and I am hoping Big Ben still strikes the time Raffaelina but I get a sense of the world coming to an end in your poem here, a chilling filling I must say, I heard that all the airlines are going bust! Will I ever get home again, I am wondering, a fine write, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 05-May-2020



reply by the author on 05-May-2020
    Thanks, Dolly, for the review. I did change the picture to clockworks.
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Made me think of my trip to Wallmart. Every wearing mask and me and a few without. Six months ago I would have got shot wearing a mask. I like your free verse. Made sense to me.


 Comment Written 05-May-2020



reply by the author on 05-May-2020
    Thank you for your review. The theme is apparently close to the way things are now.
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