Great contest entry. Beautiful presentation and artwork to accompany your well-penned words. I enjoyed the alliteration, too. And, of course, an awesome subject! Nice work ... Best wishes in the contest!
Awesome 2-4-6-8 poem! You've really made the most of it, and have utilized every syllable perfectly.
Consider capitalizing "Lion" and "Lamb," as they are among the many names or titles of Jesus Christ.
Your picture is really beautiful and very impressive.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
Thanks your kindly for your review. Thanks for reminding me of the need to capitalize Lion and Lamb, your kindness is greatly appreciated.
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 08-May-2020
You're very welcome, my friend. Blessings to you too,