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Green Goddess Lily (Haiku)


a beauty of nature

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Patty Palmer
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A very sweet poem that tells how pretty the lily is. The picture is a beautiful one. I like lilies but lilies don't like me. If I get near one, I've ended up in the hospital over it. Good luck with the contest!
Love and hugs!
Patty


 Comment Written 07-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    Patty,

    Thanks so much sweetie, I am glad you enjoyed this Haiku and many thanks for the best wishes. God Bless!

    Hugs...Portia

reply by Patty Palmer on 08-Jun-2020
    You're welcome!!!
    Hugs!
    Patty
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This is a lovely haiku, Portia! And your picture is lovely. I like how you use the "twirl" of the flower and the "unfolds its beauty" for the the satori ending. Hope you do well in the contest!


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    Helen,

    Thanks so much for the very kind review. I am glad you enjoyed this Haiku, many thanks for the best wishes.

    Hugs...Portia
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richie b
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Portia,
I am not versed in Haiku. Your words are
gentle and serene. Your poem speaks of calmness
and peace that only the Creator can share.
A well written poem; best wishes in contest!
Blessings,
Richie


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    Hi Richie,

    I pray you and your family are doing well on this beautiful day.

    Thanks so much for your review, kind words and best wishes.
    Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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Portia, I love your Haiku poem. The background color and the color of the words have a beautiful effect on your photo and poem. The way you've worded your poem, you would not need a photo for the readers to visualize a lily.
Portia,
Have a good weekend. Hugs and agape love to you.
Cindy


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    Cindy,

    I a m glad you enjoyed this, thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.
    I pray you are having a wonderful day.

    Hugs...Portia
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-Lovely image and
presentation, Portia.
-A good haiku with
correct syllable count, along with
nature and seasonal imagery.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    Pam,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia


reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Jun-2020
    You are very welcome, and you have a good day, too, Portia.
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The best to you pharp in this contest
My the Green Goddess Lily is beautiful
And yes your haiku show to beauty of the lily
Gert


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    Gert,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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