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Lord and Savior

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Bill Schott
 
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This cinquain, Jesus, has the proper 2-4-6-8-2 formatting and follows the specific parts of speech directives and presents the Son of God to the reader. Nice.


 Comment Written 13-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
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This is such a lovely and very true poem you have penned for the cinquain contest. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review...

    Blessings
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A wonderful Christian testimony in poetic form! :) Great employment of the Cinquain format here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and best wishes...
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Jmf4119
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Excellent cinquain poem. Love the descriptive words you used describe Jesus. Good use of alliteration and very nice presentation.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Janet,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings...
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karenina
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A reverent yet powerful Cinquain! Beautiful in presentation and content. Simple praise is so much more effective to me...one need not embellish the treasure given to believers and those who I pray will come to believe.
Karenina


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for you review and very kind comments.

    Blessings

reply by karenina on 12-May-2020
    If you don't win (whomever you are)--somethings wrong!--Karenina

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    Karenina with the beautiful name...you are so sweet and kind. You put a smile on my face.

    Hugs...

reply by karenina on 12-May-2020
    Ahhhh. Thank you!--Karenina
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very well said my friend, God is my savior and all the beautiful words you have written, if this is in a contest you surely would have my vote


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...
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Coco Jane
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Some good stuff here.
In line 2, consider using words that are less similar. Righteous and blameless seem to me to say basically the same thing. Maybe righteous and humble, powerful, obedient, perfect?
Line 4 has some nice sounds in it.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2020



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    Thanks so much for your honest review , very kind comments and suggestions, they are greatly appreciated. I did use your suggestion and changed from blameless to "humble."

    Blessings...
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royowen
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This is a beautifully written cinquain, and it's so well presented that I think it enhances these wonderful works that God has wrought through his Son, this is a great post, and this is a good post, well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



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    Roy,

    Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Blessings...

reply by royowen on 12-May-2020
    My pleasureb
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Have no doubt that this the best piece. Excellent work and I liked the presentation and style of the poem. Wish to know how you designed the piece. It's very attractive. Keep it up by writing more. I highly recommend your work to others


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day...

    Blessings
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Janice Canerdy
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Your cinquain is vividly descriptive, skillfully composed and deeply spiritual. These powerful words could be used, collectively, to describe no one but the Lord.


 Comment Written 11-May-2020



reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Janice,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Blessings...
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