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God Is With Me


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zanya
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Yes a poem expressing a deep Faith in God- 'the One that leads'- a sense of calm and reflective thought pervades the tone of the poem -thanks for sharing


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reply by the author on 11-May-2020
    Thank you for this review. I appreciate your words regarding calmness and reflective thought.
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I like all the ways you explored that God is with us. He is ahead of us, behind us, beside us, inside us - many amens! Best wishes with the "I Am" contest.


 Comment Written 11-May-2020



reply by the author on 11-May-2020
    Thank you for this fine review. I am grateful for your attention.
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This is really good and well thought out. I like the message of dependence conveyed in it. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!


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    Thank you for your blessed review. Much appreciated.
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This six-line spiritual poem, God Is With Me, has the proper formatting and reinforces the idea that God follows us, walks beside us, and leads us at all times.


 Comment Written 11-May-2020



reply by the author on 11-May-2020
    Thank you for this informative and fine review.
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The rising and the setting of the sun are times for reflection, and inevitably one's thoughts turn to the infinite. As a metaphor for the guiding beacon of God, they are without parallel.


 Comment Written 10-May-2020



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    It pleases me that you agree. Thank you for a thoughtful review.
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A poem of belief in rhymes all the way speaks you are always with God, all the day, and at night when you kneel to pray; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR


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    Thank you for your thoughtful review. I do appreciate your words.
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Not sure if this has to be from the point of view of god or not, the contest I mean. Either way, this poem was all right. Nothing much stood out about it.

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 Comment Written 09-May-2020



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    Your comments are appreciated.
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I nicely sestet that glorifies the love of God, and lifts Him in the realms of the heavenlies where the Lord of Heaven lives. Beautifully written rhyming sestet. An excellent job, blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    Thank you for your review and wise comments.

reply by royowen on 10-May-2020
    Bless you
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This is lovely. The photo is really unique and matches text well. Sentiment is encouraging to so many of us.
Maybe change "take" to "lead" in line 4...
Might take "down" out of the last line...
Thank you for the opportunity to review your work.
Well done!


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reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    Thank you for the review and comments. I will look that over.
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The poem followed the rules to a tee. Everything rhyming perfectly as it should be. This poem is so inspirational. I enjoyed reading every line. It was perfect. -January L


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reply by the author on 10-May-2020
    Thank you for your lovely review. I'm pleased you enjoyed reading the words.
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