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Fantastical Reflections


It happened just like that... once upon a time

  48 total reviews 
Comment by
Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your story in a poem contest entry, YM. I like the light-heated, whimsical feel of it, but it still has the makings of a love story. I like the ending, too. Your rhymes, meter, and imagery are great. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Jan, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the rest of the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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karenina
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This was like pure license to read an adult fairy tale (literally)--in verse and rhyme. I loved every word, the background color, the image selected, the love captured as though you picked a bushel of sparkling stars and shared them with us! I am enchanted that YOU are enchanted.--Karenina


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Yeah...NO. This is certainly not auto-biographical -- this is the imagination in gear! ;) :) :) I do appreciate that you enjoyed it, my lady, and I do so appreciate your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Glad to hear you enjoyed this one... take care of you and enjoy the rest of the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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susand3022
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Well now, if that doesn't explain just about everything about you and your extreme imagination! LOL, I should have known you came from another realm... you had too much first-hand knowledge of all that to have made it all up, BLOTS! ;)


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    LOL!! Yeah, it certainly feels like I'm an 'alien' more often than not, BLOTN!! ;) :) Glad you enjoyed my fantastical 'welcome' to summertime!! Gonna try to do some writing and get my characters happy about the summer as well - lol! ;) Thanx for these wonderful stars, but, more than that, thanx for YOU!! ;) Take care up there! ;) Yvette
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This story poem, Fantastical Reflections, has a fun tale of your former fae state that has been transformed into this human status. Glad you switched?


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    yeah... definitely NOT auto-biographical - LOL! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in on this one, Bill -- take care out there! ;) Yvette
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is well written. It has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you so much for your review, Raul - much appreciated! ;)

reply by Raul1 on 13-May-2020
    You're welcome.
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Susan Larson
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What a beautiful love story. With a catch like that, why would anyone care about having wings? Very captivating and very whimsical. I look forward to what your muse brings out of you now that school is our!


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Susan, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land (HOORAY, it's summer!!)! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the rest of the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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JudyE
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What a very touching and loving poem. So the fairy came down from above, captivated by brown eyes, and stayed in the human realm. Good for her - and good luck in the contest.

Stay safe
Judy


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Judy, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the rest of the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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heavenempress
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Excellent piece of work and I liked the presentation and style of the poem. Actually the poem is fantastic itself and I liked every bit of it. Excellent word choice and rich vocabulary. Keep it up by writing more. I highly recommend your work to others


 Comment Written 12-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Empress, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the rest of the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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Amanda Louise Davis
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I absolutely loved this. The only thing I can even think of to recommend is that in the part about the leaves in yonder tree, it would sound better as 'on yonder tree,' but still, this poem was very awesome.


 Comment Written 11-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you for the review and the suggestion - I did mean for it to be 'in'. Have a great day out there! ;)
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smileycloud
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what a lovely experience reading your very poetic poem
love the mysterious whimsical language
the story is so endearing and so pleased the finale put the two characters together in such a mysterious way
I am sure her wings were well sacrificed for this beautiful love poem
the flow and cadence is fine and the true and near rhymes work well
have a smiley day


 Comment Written 11-May-2020



reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Smiley, for your wonderful review and comments on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the rest of the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette

reply by smileycloud on 13-May-2020
    Yvette
    :):):)
    Lorraine
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