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Nonet

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BeasPeas
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This is an upbeat and positive Nonet. Illustrated well, too. Gratefulness is the mainstay of happiness in our lives. Best of luck in the contest if it isn't over. Marilyn


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Hi Marilyn,
    Thank you for the wonderful review. Gratitude is essential in my book and I love your comment about it.

    This contest ends in December which is far enough out that I should forget that I even entered, which is a good thing.

reply by BeasPeas on 26-Jun-2020
    Well, good luck in it.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours!!!!!! I love your: word choice, topic, and the picture that you selected!!!!!!! Good luck in the contest!!!!!

-Tanvi Pauddar :)


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
    Thank you. I appreciate you going back to read this one and for the good luck wishes.
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This is really inspirational, reminding us on the need to throw away our worries and live a joyous life of the moment, appreciating the works of Nature. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 15-May-2020
    Hi ESOSTINE,
    Thank you for your encouraging comments and insights on the tops, also for the good luck wishes. I see your recently joined FanStory. Welcome.
    Debi
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This is a very beautiful and very well written Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 14-May-2020



reply by the author on 15-May-2020
    Hi Teri7,
    I appreciate the encouraging comments about the writing and presentation. Thank you for the good luck wishes. God bless.
    Debi
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Great flashes of images swirling in this kalaidascope of life pick us up and whirl us into hope in this poem. The ever tightening meter of this form is a great example of form framing the theme. I think you hit the right key word for the ending: Live. We pick our lives and start living again, through our appreciation for the world around us; the stars, the flowers, the gentle moonbeams. estory


 Comment Written 14-May-2020



reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Hi estory,
    Thank you for the excellent analysis of the message and the poetry form. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review.
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joycetreasures
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Hello W.J.DEBI
I pray you are well, as well as your family during this pandemic. Your Nonet is so touching and moving in my spirit. I agree with your message. We should each day to the fullest, enjoying the life we have. We should make sure we stop and smell the roses, every day. And, of course, we should be humbly grateful for each moment in life. Well-done. Your imagery is simply gorgeous. Thanks for sharing this lovely nonet. Happy writing:-) Stay safe.


 Comment Written 14-May-2020



reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Hi joycetreaures,
    Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the message and for the good wishes. You stay safe as well.
    Debi

reply by joycetreasures on 14-May-2020
    You are welcome.
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This is a gorgeous poem, Debi. You have made a truly excellent poem. There is no point in living in fear over something that will happen someday, in normal circumstances anyway. We should live life to the fullest!


 Comment Written 14-May-2020



reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Hi Bichon,
    Thank you for the shiny six stars and for sharing your insights on the topic. Live a wonderful day and stay safe.
    Debi
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A brilliant summing up of how we should greet the day! Of course there will be obstacles, what would black be without white? Yin and Yang must survive this endless wheel of life. I just wrote a poem on fear myself. "The only way out is through. The storm will pass and the sun will shine again. Well done poet. Good luck in the contest XXK.


 Comment Written 14-May-2020



reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Hi Aussie,
    Thank you for the generous six-star rating and your insights on the theme. I remember reading your poem. You are so right--the only way out is through!
    Debi
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Your nonet is well done with a very succinct message about being aware of the fact that the length of life is unknown, therefore we should live in the moment. It will do well in the contest. Good luck.


 Comment Written 13-May-2020



reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Hi Rafaelina Lowcock,
    Thank you for the encouraging analysis and good luck wishes. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review.
    Debi
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Warren Rodgers
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Terrific Nonet poem for the contest, Debi. You have delivered the message in perfect syllable count with some nice alliteration and meaningful words. Good advice too!

I think you have a very good shot of winning.
It's good to read and review your consistently high quality poetry again. Good luck in the contest.

All the best,
Rodger


 Comment Written 13-May-2020



reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Hi Rodger,
    Thank you for the generous six stars and for the wonderful comments. You brightened my day with your encouragement.
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