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Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Wow, Portia, this is a very impressive little poem. I'm not quite sure how I feel about the idea (the context) but I know that "be watchful and pray" is marvelous advice... Best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Dawn,

    Thank you so much for your review, six star rating, very kind comments and best wishes. Stay safe and have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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Pharp,
Your poem excites me! The return of Jesus Christ
has no rival story or contest.
Your words bring spiritual imagery that the earth
has never experienced. Your choice of artwork and
beautiful words are awe inspiring!
Peace and Blessings,
Richie b


 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Richie,

    I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Blessings...Portia

reply by richie b on 17-May-2020
    Portia,
    Enjoy the day,
    You are Blessed!
    Richie
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Jesus Returns
by pharp

Hello, my friend,

A fine entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. I really like the presentation. Good syllable count. I wish you the best in the contest.


 Comment Written 16-May-2020


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    Hello Sweet Gypsy,

    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Hugs...Portia
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Wish I had six stars, but used them all, This is very well written. It is very meaningful, Jesus' return described in three lines. The picture is
an excellent choice. It gave me goosebumps.


 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Willie,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day,

    Blessings...Portia
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You get my last six! This is outstanding. I am impressed and appreciative of all the biblical research you do for your spiritual poetry. People write about their "muse" and how it inspires them. I think it's obvious who your "Muse" is.


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    Susan,

    Thanks so much for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day. Susan, your comments placed a poem in my spirit. I will work on it today. Stay safe and well...

    Hugs...Portia
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riding a white horse

Jesus returns in Glory ~

be watchful and pray.
Quite unexpected but very truthful and it seems that that time is near. Thank you fir sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 16-May-2020


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    Iza,

    Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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If you know your Bible, this would make sense, but you also helped by including the info in your notes. I think you did well with this poem. It fits the prompts also.


 Comment Written 15-May-2020


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    Amanda,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a chance of winning the contest! It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 15-May-2020


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    Raul,

    Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia

reply by Raul1 on 16-May-2020
    You're welcome and thanks!
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To see Jesus come riding on a white horse through Heaven's gates would be wonderful. I can't see it happening in my time, but He will come, He has told us so. Your 5-7-5 poem is well written and conveys a wonderful message. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx


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    Sandra,

    Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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He can't come soon enough. The world is so hungry for His presence. I appreciated your poem and your statement of faith. I am watchful and I am doing a lot of praying.


 Comment Written 15-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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