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Memory Lane


A Free Verse poem...

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qinluo
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Oh, love the umbrella on a rainy day . Capturing a peice of green leaf to escape the sinister from sun of desert ¼?a drop of the water moisten the aningeresting of chapped land , a chunk of land which float above the sea to stand, slim but precious.





 Comment Written 21-May-2020



reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you so much! :) xoxo
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Each of us inside of ourselves has our own memory lane that we can walk down whenever we feel the need to. It can take us back to many wonderful memories or even some sad ones if we allow those to surface. Your poem was very nicely done and as always thank you for sharing with us all. Great job.


 Comment Written 19-May-2020



reply by the author on 24-May-2020
    Thank you so much Larry! Sorry to be delayed in responding. I?ve been a little preoccupied with Twitter and the declassification against the FBI and others! I am a knowledge seeker and trying to absorb it all while it?s freshly out there. xoxoxo

reply by Larry5000 on 29-May-2020
    No problem, I do not get involved in Twitter at all, bad enough on Facebook with everything going on there.
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Exceptional. A retelling of your life from the present looking back to childhood. I believe our memories shape us into the person we become. It's good to feed upon the richest ones. I really enjoyed this video from CATS. This talented lady had such a stellar performance.
Sending you my best today as always and six stars for your crown.
Sal xoxoxoxoxoxo!!!!!!


 Comment Written 17-May-2020



reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you precious friend! I?m so happy you enjoyed taking this journey with me! My book/your book will arrive Monday finally! Haha! I?m so excited to share it! xoxoxoxo
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So very glad I had a six for this. Phenomenal free verse. Loaded with emotion and wonderful words of wisdom and creativity. This may be one of the favorites I have read from you. Jumped out at me this morning and touched my heart!
Wendy


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reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Awe! Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed this journey with me! Big hugs!! xoxo
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Memory Lane
by Diana L Crawford

Hello, Diana,

I like your free verse, it's one of my favorite poetic forms. I like the stanza about being a hippie...I can relate LoL nice presentation too. Well done my friend.


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Mine too! Love free verse! So happy you enjoyed taking this journey with me! xoxoxo
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The sweet nostalgia that permeates your poem, lends it a poignancy to be cherished. Hold on to your memories of love as they massage your heart forever. I loved reading your poem of how you have evolved.


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you so much! Appreciate you enjoyed. And yes, I am amazed at how much I?ve grown as a poet and writer because of this site and all of you! xoxo
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I really enjoyed reading this Diana, it's nice to sometimes sit and think and go back through our lives. I liked how you examined how your own life has evolved over the years, especially from your teenage years and back to your early childhood when even the very simplest of things could provide joy.


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you so much for taking the journey with me. Appreciate your time and precious feedback! xoxo
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I really enjoyed this profoundly meaningful, vividly descriptive, and poignant piece. The lane called Memory is one we travel for different reasons. Sometimes we want to; sometimes we must


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Absolutely true! Appreciate your time and precious feedback! xoxo
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I do love that song... It was the one chosen by my mother to be played at her funeral and so it has always been weighted with emotion for me. Love your free verse as well...for to stay static in the memories of one part of our lives is similar to reading a single chapter in a wonderful novel. We have pathos, joy, elation, regret, pride, shame, love, loss, grief, and all variations of the above...each has come together to create the most unique US we can be. Beautiful!--Karenina


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Awe! Thank you for sharing that about your mom. I?ve always felt it a truly emotional song for life is quite an emotional ride! Appreciate you took this journey with me! xoxoxoxo

reply by karenina on 27-May-2020
    XOXOXO back at ya! It was an emotive and beautiful poem--great write!--Karenina

reply by the author on 28-May-2020
    Mwah! xoxo
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Oh Diane, you make my heart skip a beat with this stanza that was for me a personal, ah, yes... Very real!
And last stop
my childhood
where the deepest of love
could be found
on grandpa's lap
yet one still sprinkled
with the bitter way
of a fatherless child


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    And that, my friend, is why we write! If we cannot move others with our words, then it is pointless to write. I?m so happy that you can relate! Appreciate you came on this journey with me! xoxoxo
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