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Social Distancing


We all need to observe the two metres apart

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January L'Angelle
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I like your SOCIAL DISTANCING acrostic poem. You were accurate in the structure of the poem and your style is wonderful. I enjoyed the message in this poem very much. Well penned. -January L.


 Comment Written 16-May-2020



reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thank you so much, January L, for giving me such a great review. It has boosted me. Keep safe.
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Marjon van Bruggen
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You are so right! Let's be grateful to just be alive, because none of us knows for sure if all the safety measures are so effective as is proclaimed, and we just cannot risk it! So let's be careful and patient. There are countries where it has already been proven that social distancing is REALLY capable of pushing back the spread of this terrible virus. It will end someday. I live in Spain. Since half of February, I have not been out of my house. I want to live!


 Comment Written 16-May-2020



reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    I so appreciate your empathetic, detailed review. Thank you. Looking at the weather report I surmise that you have some sunshine to brighten your day, but stay safe.

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 16-May-2020
    Thank you. I have the privilege of living in a big house with three families. We look after another very well. We also have a big garden and a pool, so we are not so bad off as others.
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The current style of existence described in rhyming couplets as the entire human race becomes aware of each other's personal space and hopefully takes the greatest care not to invade it.

I wonder if an Olympic virus can leap more than two metres.


 Comment Written 16-May-2020



reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thank you for your thoughtful review. I?ll have to check Olympic records to comment on that idea!
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Well done on delivering an Acrostic on this rather difficult subject of Social Distancing -a comprehensive poetic portrayal of this new normal - a most interesting read !


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thank you,Zanya, for your great, detailed review. As for the six stars it is like a non distancing hug. I hope all is well with you in this challenging time.
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I liked the content. The three is granted as I did not see the last letter 'E' of the word distance included in this acrostic. I love the bat dances here in the Kootenays of British Columbia, Canada. But I realize that yes, they can carry disease. Yet, they perform a good service of clearing our air of mosquitoes and aphids. Hopefully...not Covid-19. Stay safe.


 Comment Written 15-May-2020



reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thank you for taking the trouble to read and review my Acrostic. The second word is ?DIstancing? and not ?Distance? but thank you anyway. You too stay safe.
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