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| Wow, this one (from my comprehension) gave me goosebumps, a huge smile, and a little tickle in my tummy. Then as quickly as the smile blossomed, a slight catch in my throat brought a tear to my eye. And I'm not the emotional type. LOL. Great job, and thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2020 |
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
Hi dear Ric,
Wow, such a uniquely expressive stream of effects and sensations
of your most uplifting and most appreciative thoughts and
compliments shared here! I am truly touched and pleased. ( It is
still quite tremulous to me even still due to the event this poem
relates to. I had been diagnosed with an inoperable brain tumor
and was attempting to word it as comfortingly as possible to my
then Fiance'. Turned out to be wrong diagnosis 1-1/2 yrs later.
End of a nightmare and romance. Fiance' since happily married
thank goodness. That best outcome and I am fine too.)
Again, a most touching and provocative review I shall treasure
all the more from your awesome insights and comprehensions.
Thanks also for the very generous extra star.
Gratefully with best wishes. Ronni
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reply by Ric Myworld on 10-Jul-2020
It's almost strange how I had no idea what you were referring to, yet my smile turned to tears and I couldn't get this piece out of my mind. I knew something had gone dreadfully wrong, but never dreamed anything so terrifying as an inoperable brain tumor. Now my smile has returned and I'm so glad your diagnosis was wrong! I hope this finds you healthy and happy. As for the fiance, sometimes the most shocking and even heartbreaking things in our lives happen for the better, as ridiculous as that may sound. Wishing you all the best! Ric
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
Hi Ric,
Strange indeed, and how instantly your comments mirrored the tragedy and
event as it occurred affected
me in reading your awesome review! Intuition or a subtle
psychic clue...which ever, you
were right on about mystery
and concerned pause. That
struck me instantly as I read on in your piercing review!
I'm glad your smile is back and indeed am fine. We never
know if fate will be doom
or a wiser discretion from
Him above and better for all
involved. So I agree fully
with your comment about
happening for the better.
Thanks for your kind wishes
and follow up reply. Sincerely
appreciated!
Have a fantastic weekend!
Gratefully, with best wishes!
Ronni
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reply by Ric Myworld on 11-Jul-2020
It's nice to know all is well with you. That in itself will make for a nice weekend. As foolish as that might sound coming from a perfect stranger. Well, a not-so-perfect stranger would be more truthful. LOL. Hope you have a wonderful weekend!
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
Hi Ric,
So glad it all made for a nice
weekend for you! I am quite
curious, how out of all the
better known and popular
poets and writers on here,
how you happened to note those 3 poems out of my
portfolio to review, and so
awesomely at that! when
neither you or I write in the
same genre or general interest area? And pray tell,
what do you mean by the reference "well, not so perfect
stranger would be more truthful? LOL)
Hope not too imposing to
wonder or inquire about these 'mysteries', but also
not find it so strange that
I would be so curious nor
ignore it. Would like to
know, if so inclined to do so.
Thanks again, and have a
cool toast on me...cheers!
Best always, Ronni
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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reply by Ric Myworld on 11-Jul-2020
Hello, Ronni,
Let's see . . . where do I start to satisfy your curiosity . . .. After two-years away from this site and noticing the absence of names regularly in contests and on listing boards, I began looking around to find them. Sadly, many of those I once read on a daily basis had passed on in such a short span of time. As I often do, I began to flip through reading different people. Especially, those I had never seen before. I'm not locked into any particular genre or style. I'm a firm believer in that "When in Rome . . ." experience whatever excites or pulls at your heartstrings. Somewhere on that path, after reading a couple comments you had made to people I knew, I hit the link to your profile. As a lifetime owner, breeder, and trainer of thoroughbred horses, your Derby hat caught my attention, making me wonder if you would even be familiar with horse racing, the Kentucky Derby, or Breeder's Cup LTD. After reading your profile-page comments, I decided against reading any of your posts. Then, a few days later, your name popped up again on another person's profile or following page. I still never gave a second thought about reading any of your posts. Sorry, but if I'm going to tell the story, why not the whole story? About a week later, just reading all the poetry on "Writing up for review," I remembered your big hat. Derby hat to me. Thinking back, I tried to remember why I decided against even reading a single poem or two of your list. Nothing came to mind right off. Then, always wanting to think of myself as open minded and non-judgemental, I clicked on your link to read. I can't say why I chose one poem over another or if maybe I just went down the list. I don't think of myself as limited to anything, genre, or general interests. I've always been able to rub elbows with the Prince or the pauper and manage to fit in inconspicuously. When and if I choose, of course. My reference to not-so-perfect stranger came to mind when I referred to myself as a perfect stranger. Like all of whom I've ever met, no one is perfect, including me. Although, most of my life I would have debated the issue. But now, older and hopefully some degree smarter and humbled by life, the things that once ruled my every move no longer seem important. Surprised by the impact your poems made on me, I kept reading. I went from smiling to choked up, knowing there was something really deep and trying, making me just want to know more. And I don't find your curiosity strange. I would have been much more disappointed had you ignored it. I still feel strange myself that I had such unavoidable and unexplainable connection to what your words said. Remember, you asked for an explanation. So it's all your fault I have rambled on forever. I hope I have answered all our questions.
Cheers, to you my dear, and a wonderful rest of your weekend!
Ric
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
Hi again Ric,
Indeed, you answered all my questions as candidly and
honestly as to how and why
of reviews of my poetry, most
admirably and appreciably.
I expected no more or less,
and you kept true to your
integrity and discretions, most objectively. Likewise
most admirably noted.
As to my hat...it is not a
true "Derby" hat per se but
rather a simple, basic time of the season fashion hat, meant to compliment attire
and event or travel, and also
a choice to combat those ever
nasty Santa Anna winds while
living in So. Ca. and safe face
for a 'bad hair day' too we ladies are often prone to. (Sorry about disappointment about it not being a typical
Derby hat.)
I do however love horses
and horse stories, and like
watching the horse races on
TV, like some of the major
horse race competitions set
up every year or so. To me,
horses are some of the most
beautiful and amazing breed
on this planet. Have ridden
a few at friends ranch, every
now and then. Always love it.
As to unavoidable connection and premonition
you had on reading "What Cannot Yet Come To Be" and your lingering curiosities, and
my astounded surprise and
mystery as to how and why
perhaps happened for a reason, for which neither you
or know or explain. Maybe
doesn't need any, just noted
as it did and let it be at that.
Maybe at some unknown time
we may have a clue or guess,
one never can assess or analyze feelings and emotions suddenly sparked.
Now, I have rambled on
'forever'...thanks for reply
and such spirted good wishes! Same to you and
take a bow for being a writer
on here I came to read and
appreciated 'chatting' with
in between our replies and
reviews, and will indeed be
reading more of. Pleasure to have met you here indeed.
You too enjoy your weekend
too and have a blast and
keep writing more and more!
Gratefully, with best wishes
always, Ronni
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reply by Ric Myworld on 12-Jul-2020
Good morning, Ronni,
It's an early morning for you, 6:20 and, I hope this finds you fast asleep or in the middle of a sweet dream.
I had more figured your hat as a millinery accent or fascinator as called in parts of the world, rather than a Derby hat. I had, actually, figured you from outside the states, maybe England. Anyway, I like it. Then, the mention of the Santa Ana winds caused me to realize you were from here (a pleasant surprise), even before reading Southern Cali girl. Originally named Santana Winds (Spanish winds), I've been in LA when ash sat two-inches thick on my car from fires pushed by the winds. I had to stay three-extra days once when all the airports were closed from San Diego to above Santa Barbara because of smoke.
Your reference of "Spark" pretty much describes the sensation best. Some little magic spark, from out of nowhere. Electrified. I just had to know more. Now, here I am, someone who hates to type or text, rambling on forever, pages upon pages, to communicate what could be said in person within minutes. Seemingly desperate for more information, resembling a frenzied squirrel gathering acorns. Highly exaggerated. Well, maybe not highly. LOL.
Drive slow and drink plenty of ice water! Ric
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
Hello again Ric,
Ca. was an 'experience' strange
and most perplexing, coming
from E. Europe Balkan Roots
and schooled in Midwest, Iowa, with major work and
career years in. So. Ca. and
currently in NE Ok, while phasing out hectic pace and
mad traffic, to take advantage
of teaching elective course in
The Humanities at local college, something I always
wanted to do, but turned to
Business Communications for
the better $$$ and challenges. Switch and relocation was quite a hassle and another cultural trial time. But I love my position
and the great students I have and much slower pace. I miss most is the Beaches in
So. Ca. Most favorite places!
I beg to differ with you on
talk being better or preferred
than type or text. While talk is more immediate and most
tempting, my world and orientation is best and
better in text exchange like
in EM or mail communication.
I hate text when it is so stupid to cramp text when voice or EM offers much more
communication without instant voice talk, which I agree is more expedient and
tempting, but my least favorite choice except when
a choice is made for it for
certain compelling reasons,
circumstances depending on
the person involved. May
seem strange to you, but
works best for me.
I gathered from your explanation how you came to find interest in me and works
in portfolio, you were less
than impressed with info in
in my authors Bio, more or
less casually breezed through
it, which is ok and not offensive critical either way.
But if you had read through it all the way to the end of it,
my EMail is listed there. If
you so wish to exchange on
EM our FS mutual writer interests or subjects thereof,
you are most welcome to
do so anytime. Not your
preferred type of contact, so choice is entirely up to you.
No judgement or offense if
you do not choose to.
I did sleep well, thank you,
and was again a delightful
surprise to see another reply
from you this morning.
Hope you have a fun and
great day what you love doing
best and just have blast!
Thanks again for the "chat"
Best wishes always, Ronni
c
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Aaaah, my dearest Ronni... I read your words and felt your words, for that is the depth to which they reach...beautifully heart-aching and yet fully devoted from beginning to end.
But you know, as I now glance up at the words and phrases you've so eloquently strung together, I wonder just how many (or, perhaps, how few) of our graduating seniors this year could even find a hint of the human passion that is so deeply woven throughout... why? Because of the 'new language' and focus on 'modern communication'... so many words and expressions 'would not compute' with them. The thought is neither here nor there, just a bit of spurious thoughts and wistfulness, I suppose. Sigh.
Thoroughly enjoyed and found myself entranced at some choices...
no earthly possession or glory equal to its measure or worth
Now THAT is love that lasts a lifetime. :) ;) Thank you, my lady, and may you have a joyful rest of the week! :) Hope your sister's recovery continues on its forward path! ;) Blessings from Dixie!! ;) Yvette
to alter fates decree --> to alter fate's decree
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reply by the author on 27-May-2020
Hello dear Yvette,
You aced it so perfectly, in essence and empathies, and your
own affinities and nostalgia even more astutely and appreciably.
Right you are too, this generation of seniors will likely not have
those intermittent nostalgic moments or wafting memories of
a time, place, a moment when the earth shifted beneath them,
a song or smile that just suddenly, achingly or sweetly just
sails through the senses like delicate spring breeze. Nor will
they know when sometimes saying goodbye is more futuristic
and blessed than can ever be perceived at the time. So pleased
you enjoyed and rallied through it so illustriously and intriguingly.
Sister recovery is going well, just had to help doing the paperwork
and financials for her, yes even in a tech age, still so much damn
paperwork and other odds and ends. So once again, I can try
and get back to my schedule and more time on here read and post.
Thanks for all you lovely thoughts and thoughtfulness, no less
so for your kind patience. You too take time for you too, and
sipping and toasting those virtual tea visits to you too dear!
Love blessings always!!! Ronni (;) (:)
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Isn't this just beautiful Miss Ronni!
It reminds me of the old-fashioned-hero-heroine
romances that we all miss in life.
Such beauty is seldom lived, but for the lucky few.
Astounding picture also,
overall...stunning!
It would make even the most jaded...want to believe!
Loved this,
blessings...
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reply by the author on 27-May-2020
Hello dear Irish Rain,
Thank you for your perceptive and perfectly reflective
thoughts and comments dear, glad you enjoyed it so!
Ahh indeed, were it not for our dreams or fantasies yet to be,
or the hopes and dreams never dare or brave enough to be,
there lies in between that even more illusive and mysterious
eternity...Amen. Thanks so much for extra star too!!!
Apologies for late reply, delay due to Sister's illness in Ca.
and keeping conferences with her & her Doctor's and medical care
needed and relocation to special clinic and treatments.
Hope all is well with you and yours!
Love, blessings always, Ronni
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reply by Irish Rain on 27-May-2020
I hope your sister is ok! You are most welcome Miss Ronni...stay safe!
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reply by the author on 27-May-2020
Thanks dear,
Sister's recovery will be a slow
and gradual process, but manageable thankfully. Mine
a continually watchful one. Only Sis I have so that is normal and endearingly
obliging one.
Thanks for your caring thoughts. Love, blessings,
Ronni
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reply by Irish Rain on 28-May-2020
Prayers for both of you Miss Ronni, I'll be thinking of you.
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reply by the author on 28-May-2020
Thank you dear one!
Sincerely appreciated by both dear one! Stay blest, loved safe and well!
Love, Ronni
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reply by Irish Rain on 28-May-2020
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