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Sense of Heaven


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Iza Deleanu
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I love this expression it's so poetic - a brush of nighttime it goes do well with the picture. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.


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reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you so much!!
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qinluo
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Oh, a wonderful poem , falling into the ocean of keen and delicate nature. The fruit of practicing , right ¼?I love it . When the sunshine pouring down , itch my eyes , enjoy the baptism from the nature and ground , the birds whisper to ear of sky , wind wanna kiss the birds , birds are shy , then roll in the sky with light .ahahahah l lost the metre .


 Comment Written 20-May-2020



reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you for your review!

reply by qinluo on 20-May-2020
    Good morning , the line of ants on the ground provide me with a fantasy route and roll me into small world with joy and foolly .Aha
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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Angels are messengers from God. He uses them to serve us, help and protect us--whatever He tells them to do for humans. They serve us.


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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful comments!

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 20-May-2020
    You're welcome.
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Close your eyes...
Sense of Heaven

Hello, my friend,

Beautiful entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest and the presentation. Good naani form. Great imagery.


 Comment Written 20-May-2020



reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you, Gypsy!!
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this beautiful, appealing poem. Since the Bible describes angels as "ministering spirits"
sent by God (Hebrews 1:14), this could literally happen.


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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    You are so right! Thank you for stopping by...
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harmony13
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The author's words are soothing, descriptive and creative. I found the
word of this poem to be calming and give hope. The artwork is perfect
and compliments this poem.


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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you!
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A very well-written Naani about the sense of heaven that we can expect from gentle breezes in the early night sky, is like a brush from an angel on our skin suggesting subtle hints.


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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you, Sandra!
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A. Louise Robertson
 
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Six Stars! You said so much in four lines and the picture is perfect! I am so aware of the presence of angels and I know for sure that they are active here on earth. What a lovely and gentle reminder of their gentle care.


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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Oh my! Thank you for such an awesome review and those bright and shiny stars - I am so very glad to know that this spoke to your heart...that means so much to me to hear!! Be safe and have a wonderful Wednesday! 8-)
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Love the picture. The poem is sweet and short and flows well. It gives me a feeling of peace and love when I read this. Very calm. Amazing work.


 Comment Written 20-May-2020



reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you, AJ!!

reply by AJ McCall on 20-May-2020
    you're welcome!
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papa55mike
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We have no idea how many Angels walk by us, every day. What a wonderfully written poem, and I learned another form of poetry.

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike


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reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Thank you, Mike!
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