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Giving tribute to...lyenochka

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Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is a great tribute to your teacher. I enjoyed reading it. Your rhymes, smooth flow, and message are good. However, it is that message that stands above all others. As you stated, Helen is a compassionate and talented writer. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
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dragonpoet
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This poem fits the prompt well. It is a good ode to lyenochka in aabb quatrains. She is a talented writer and a good reviewer.
Good luck and keep writing
Stay healthy.
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..

reply by dragonpoet on 21-May-2020
    You are most kindly welcome.
    DP
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Mystery poet,
Very nice tribute to our lyenochka a writer of poetry, flash prompts, and I believe very good information to read about various interesting that draws our attention
Smiles to the format ABAB rhyming.
AH, to the way you presented your poem with the beautiful picture.
Gert


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem in appreciation of a teacher and specifically one of FanStory's own talented teacher that always have something interesting to post that is informative and uplifting.


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
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Sally Law
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She is a gem! How blessed you are, mystery poet. She's a teacher to us all whether she realizes it or not. I learn something every time I click on to anything she writes. She is mighty small, but carries a mighty big pen.
Sending my best today is always, and my very best for the contest,
Sally xo


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
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A. Louise Robertson
 
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This is such a lovely tribute to a FanStory poet who became your teacher and mentor. I am so appreciative of this website and the space it provides for us poets and writers. I feel like I'm in a very special association of caring and talented people. Good luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
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BethShelby
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This is a lovely tribute to a teacher who is an excellent poet and writer. I think this is very well rhymed and perfect for the teacher appreciation contest.


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thanks so much for your review and comments.
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Janice Canerdy
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This is a creatively-conceived, well-written tribute to a very talented and versatilve writer. You have made excellent use of specific details to provide a well-rounded view of her "poetfolio."


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thanks so much for your review and comments.
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A. Willow Bends
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What a wonderful tribute you have paid to your teacher on the site! She should frame this and hang it in a prominent place in her home. I taught in the public schools for a few years and these type compliments never stray far from our minds, esp when done in the unique and wonderful poetic way you penned it. Excellent!
Wendy


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thanks so much for your review and comments.
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Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-A very well written
tribute to Lyenochka.
-The poem flows well
with good meter and rhyme,
along with the many reasons
she is deserving of appreciation.
-She does share many things
on the site, as well as caring about others.
-I am sure she appreciates this very much.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 21-May-2020


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    Thanks so much for your review and comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-May-2020
    You are quite welcome.
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