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Just Say No...


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Twelve words have be sufficient for the exquisite poetess to use in the fitted connotation and semantic use the selected word of "obsequious" which is rarely use in English but much used in the Italian language. This prompt writing entry for the obscure contest has been perfectly written, set throughout its syllables counting and fixed description due to its Narrative content. A great work and brava!


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Wow, Tony! Thank you so much for the six stars on this one -- so good of you to stop by today!! ;) Hope things are okay over there -- have a wonderful weekend and many, MANY thanx for the starshine in mine!! ;) Yvette

reply by Alchera on 26-Jun-2020
    You deserve them all, dear friend of mine! Blessings, Tony
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This is really cute! Love to learn this obscure word. Photo matches perfectly with text. Love the colors. Wry sense of humor. Nothing to improve here.
Well done!


 Comment Written 24-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    LOL!! :) Glad you enjoyed, my lady!! :) Take care out there! ;) Yvette

reply by Lucy de Welles on 26-May-2020
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This 7-9-7 for obscure words, Just Say No, has the proper formatting and reminds me to be more believable when I'm pretending to care about someone's problems.


 Comment Written 24-May-2020



reply by the author on 24-May-2020
    Lol! Thanks for the review and the smile, Bill!
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Jannypan (Jan)
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You are right, Mystery Author. You can tell the minute they open their mouth that they are insincere. Your words flow well and describe the unusual word. Good job with the syllable count per line. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 22-May-2020



reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you.
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A very well-written 7-9-7 obscure word about taking up too much tasks on and we cannot handle it anymore and when we are about to get up to date the next bunch of tasks is there to keep us busy for another week.


 Comment Written 22-May-2020



reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, and remember to keep it real!
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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Just Say No...


Hello my friend

A fine entry for the
Obscure Word 7-9-7 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. I like the presentation too with a funny picture. Obsequious is a good choice.


 Comment Written 22-May-2020



reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you, and remember to keep it real!
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A. Louise Robertson
 
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Well done for this contest entry. And the picture you chose here is absolutely perfect with your poem. We have all encountered these phony folks and you have written a very apt description of their manner.


 Comment Written 22-May-2020



reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Many thanks for your review! Remember, keep it real!
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Dolly'sPoems
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This is what you sometimes get when shopping as the assistant appears to be helping but her heart is not in it, yet her smile is beaming at everyone, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 22-May-2020



reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Yes!! Thanks for the review.
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Suzanna Ray
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Dear Author, this post made me wish I had a whole bunch of six-star bouquets to toss your way.
Your poem was a delight and the illustration a perfect match.
I hope the judges like it as much as I did.
Thanks for the laugh.


 Comment Written 21-May-2020



reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Suzanna - your words mean a lot!!
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Iza Deleanu
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Yup you are so right sometimes a smile is missed interpreted as a welcome approach when is actually just a friendly help and nothing more. Thank you for sharing and got luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 21-May-2020



reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you, Iza! And, remember, avoid being obsequious - lol! Take care!
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