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Salvation is a cry away

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This is a very nice spiritual story you have penned. You gave a very good example with very good and very true words. He is patiently waiting now, but one day it could be too late. Thanks for sharing my friend. May God bless you. Teri


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reply by the author on 24-May-2020
    Thank you, Teri7!
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I love this story because it inspires and encourages faith in all of us. I thought it was long enough to add depth, but short enough to keep one's interest. Excellent work which has a strong message of hope. God bless. Looking forward to reading some of your other work.


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reply by the author on 24-May-2020
    Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated, Dennis

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Great story to open up this spiritual message. I laughed at the question about turning the wheel. The answer itself--doesn't matter--can be interpreted on two levels.

Brother, sister...you may be stuck in the mud, helplessly spinning your wheels as you sink deeper and deeper.

I've felt like that sometimes and do pray for help.


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reply by the author on 24-May-2020
    Thanks, and I'm not unaware of your current situation. Sometimes I simply don't know what to say to you. God bless, Dennis

reply by Spitfire on 24-May-2020
    Thanks, Dennis, for at least keeping track of me.

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    I do wish you well and appreciate your friendship. God bless, Dennis
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It reminds me again that there are angels among us. Enjoyed the story and how providence is with us, sometimes above and sometimes below the surface of our lives. Good scripture too.


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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thanks my dear brother in Christ.
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Very similar to amazing grace in meter. As a songwriter I noticed Amazing Grace was written in similar beat to a lot of songs I wrote, a classic ballad, the original writers of hymns were all poets. When I first became a member of fanstory, I started to understand the perfection of the timing, I knew then that I was born to write, and God was my endless, bottomless supplier, what does this have to do with your story...not much, but God knew my every step from my birth to now and beyond, and evermore, how great is God? Beautifully written brother, blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thanks Roy, you certainly have a gift from God. There?s an aura of worship in your writings for sure. God bless you brother.

reply by royowen on 22-May-2020
    Bless you Denis, I watched a brilliant preaching by a man of God called Derek Prince, I like the way God appoints some people in one?s life, I?ve never met Him, but he?s been fantastically influential in my spiritual life.
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This is a wonderful post. I hope you don't mind, but I copied it and sent it to an alcoholic who is thinking of rehab. Your post will give him the nudge and encouragement he needs.


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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Mind? Never! God bless you for caring for him. Jesus has the power and the love to save anyone. YBIC, Dennis

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 22-May-2020
    I pray you are the instrument God uses.

reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    nothing would give me greater satisfaction but I'm sure your prayers are part of any blessing coming to him. Dennis
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Wonderful story, that has a lot of wisdom to it. Thank you for sharing your message. I know my Savior lives. Thank you for encouraging others to follow him. :)


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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you for your kind words!

reply by Kathleen S. on 22-May-2020
    You are very welcome. I loved the story.
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This is beautiful brother! He has never failed me yet. I've called upon my savior and Lord in the midnight watches with none to help. He was there! If I were to try to call someone, then, I might get a busy signal. Awe, but praise, honor, and glory to the Lamb of God that I can call on Him night or day. I never get a busy signal from Him. He is here, even as close as my next breath. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Bless you and well done!


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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    I've been there too brother! And there is nothing sweeter than experiencing the fearsome, faithful love of the Savior in those times!

    Let us praise Him together and trust until we see Him face to face; what a day that will be!

    Love you, brother from another mother, child of God! Dennis

reply by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 22-May-2020
    It will be glorious my brother! We are in I believe in the beginning of sorrows. The church needs to wake up. We need to reach this lost world for Jesus!

reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Yes, there's little difference between a sleeping bod and a dead one when it comes to serving.
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Wonderful! I like the way you have shown your connection and faith in God. Even while we face such death situations we tend to forget thanking Him for saving us or simply ignore. I loved your poem too. Great work and good day


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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you kindly, all praise to Jesus! The poem is actually an old hymn and I will put the author's name on it as I should have in the first place. God bless you friend, Dennis
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What a wonderful teaching. I liked the comparison that you used. We all get stuck in that mud every once in a while over something. I'm glad to say I know where to go when I need it. Have a blessed afternoon. Shirley


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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Amen! What a Savior, what power, what love! And soon we shall see Him face to face! God bless you today, dear sister in Christ, Dennis
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