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Heaven on Earth

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Comment by

Eliane Rabello

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Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

This is great indeed! I see you still get your work done so beautifully. Way to go! Your faith is crystal clear. The last two sentences closed it perfectly. I love the part 'see God face to face'. You made me stop and think.

You might not remember me but I do remember your work. I'm dropping by and decided to check some great work like yours.

I don't have much time to review but I'll try to catch up little by little.

Comment Written 31-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020

Elaine.
Wow!
My beautiful friend, it is a joy to hear from you. I pray you and your family are doing well. I will always remember you.
Thanks for dropping by and giving this outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments. Hearing from you have made my day, please take care and stay safe.
Sending my love and lots of hugs...Portia

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artisart4u

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Exceptional

It nice how you took Revelation 21 and wrote your thoughts and named it Heaven on Earth.
The couplets, color and font are nice also.
Congratulations on your wins and your poem being exceptional.
Good luck with you poem. Your know Revelation 21 pretty good.

Comment Written 31-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating, very kind comments and the congrats, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day and stay safe.

Blessings...Portia

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Gert sherwood

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Excellent

Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Portia (pharp)
your contest entry 'Heaven on Earth is so well versed with your superb rhyming and the images of what you describe are most beautiful.
Gert

Comment Written 29-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020

Gert,

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Hugs...Portia

reply by Gert sherwood on 01-Jun-2020

You are so welcome Portia (pharp)
Gert

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harmony13

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Excellent

The author's words are inspiring, descriptive, clear and creative. I
found this poem to be filled with hope. It was extremely descriptive
and filled with peace. The artwork, color scheme and text complimented
these words well. Hope you are doing well.....Maria

Comment Written 28-May-2020

reply by the author on 28-May-2020

Hello Harmony,

Thanks so much for you review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

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thaities, Rebecca V.

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This is a lovely glimpse of Heaven. God, Jesus Christ, the saints, the tree of life. the beautiful city, the Light, the angels will all be there. Lovely.

Comment Written 28-May-2020

reply by the author on 28-May-2020

Rebecca,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 28-May-2020

You're welcome.

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Suzanna Ray

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Exceptional

Dear pharmacy, This is a magnificent poem, doing what poems should do, point out the beautiful and true.
There are those who do not care for poems of faith, there are those who will scorn and deride you, but they are only exercising Gods greatest gift out side of giving his own son the be the sacrificial lamb.
That gift is the gift of free agency to choose what he will worship.

Comment Written 28-May-2020

reply by the author on 28-May-2020

Suzanna,

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

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Susan Larson

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Excellent

I am so impressed with your talent as a poet and with your thorough, scholarly and insightful study of the Bible. I missed Bible study yesterday because the kids and grandkids were here. This morning, your words served as my base for meditation on His Word.

Comment Written 28-May-2020

reply by the author on 28-May-2020

Hi Susan,

I am truly humbled by your very kind comments. Thanks so much for such an uplifting review. I am glad you found the words in this poem as your base for meditation on God's Holy word. It is always a blessing to hear from you. Enjoy your kids and grandkids and may God continue to keep you and your entire family in His loving care.

Hugs...Portia

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Alchera

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Wow! Wonderfully written throughout is stranzaic rhythmic and flowing structural format. Its thematic religious argomentazione are well exposed and described within its story lined content. Great work!

Comment Written 27-May-2020

reply by the author on 27-May-2020

Alchera,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

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Sally Law

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How lovely and biblically accurate this is, Portia. Heaven is where the Godhead is, displayed in glory and power. I'm looking forward to the it all, paradise at last. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xoxo

Comment Written 27-May-2020

reply by the author on 27-May-2020

Hello Sally,

I pray you and your family ae doing well.

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Take care and stay safe.

Blessings...Portia

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DeboraDyess

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What a beautiful glimpse into what will be for those who love the Lord and are called and respond to Him! It will be something to behold! I love how many times you reference the Bible in this. :)
One suggestions: no comma between 'boys and girls'. It's not needed.
This is so well done! Thank you for sharing and best in the contest.
Deb

Comment Written 27-May-2020

reply by the author on 27-May-2020

Deb,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and suggestions, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

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