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No Fairytale


I'm glad I don't have his nose...

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Comment by
Frederick Samson
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This is equally terrible to be honest. I'm actually dumbfounded as to where I am going wrong but I am absolutely flabbergasted as to someone who writes this patter has the audacity to rate me 3 stars. Anywho, I've actually got a fragment of a poem which far eclipses the first two poems I've read by you (and obviously the last). Fairytale / holy grail -


I live a life a fairytale,
I'm a modern day Peter Pan,
Drinking wine out the holy Grail,
Sniffing fairy dust off me hand

People like you and the people that have actually gave you 6 star ratings (like really mate, you must know that's insane), are what's ruing the credibility of genuine poets that can reignite people's passion and need for good poems. Ya disgust me


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    People like YOU are what is ruining not only poetry, but the English language. You can't even spell, let alone string a sentence together.

    You have given me two revenge reviews, and your insults towards me are tantamount to abuse.

    Bugger off you silly, pompous man. You have ideas way above your ability.
    Learn to write English, then learn to write poetry, because you have no idea of either.

    If you keep this up, I'll report you to Tom, although your total stupidity, and obvious attempts at revenge, are actually funny in a sadly pathetic way.

reply by Frederick Samson on 16-Sep-2020
    Revenge ? I?ve just read it. I?d previously forgot. Report my three star rating all you want, yano were you justify it by using the same word I actually began my poem with haha. Anywho forget all that, do you accept my challenge. Probably not. Go and snigger into your own delusion

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    What challenge would there be from a total twat like you? Indeed, you suffer delusions of poetic grandeur, and have no idea how idiotic and pathetic you come across. Anyhoo, I have dishes to wash and other tasks more pleasant than dealing with you. And if I'm deluded in any way, I'm bloody well going to continue to enjoy it.

reply by Frederick Samson on 16-Sep-2020
    Mate I know exactly what my poems are about. They are not poeticly perfect but they speak to those who have little interest in poetry. I?m not up my own arse like most. Speaking of that. I have just read your covidiocy poem. I thought it was class tbh.

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Class or crass or crap, lol!?

reply by Frederick Samson on 16-Sep-2020
    Class as in very good. It really is my type of poem. Honestly I really enjoyed. The altercation comes as easily as appreciation ha. Take care

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    So...where's my five star review? Lol!
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Iza Deleanu
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Funny and reverse emphasis on a historical fact :"
I am related
to Hans Christian Andersen
that's no fairytale..."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


 Comment Written 29-May-2020



reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Thank you Iza xoxo
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I do wonder why. He could sniff out a pretty good plot time and again. Handsome is as handsome does and I would rather have him, nose and all than the brothers Grimm.

However, your senryu said what it said in the classic senryu style so that is pretty good.


 Comment Written 28-May-2020



reply by the author on 28-May-2020
    Thanks Pantygynt, agree about Brothers Grimm lol. I have his extreme sensitivity, and relationship challenges it seems lol. Don't know about his talent because I don't write fairytales...
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zanya
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A nice touch of humour to this Senryu - however it might be advantageous to have inherited a few of his artist's genes - a great pic to illustrate --thanks for sharing


 Comment Written 28-May-2020



reply by the author on 28-May-2020
    Thank you Tanya. I might have some of his genes lol!
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