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Happiness


Things that make me happy.

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This was a wonderful poem with a lot of colour and hope and joy. I loved the picture as well. Just one word to look at if you like, suit yourself. Sounds of nature[s] OR Sounds of nature{'}s


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
    Thanks for the review and comment and for noticing the typo. Many read it but no one else noticed.
    Beth
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Oh, I have to lay a six on this one because I am certain this is the piece I voted for. So many things you mention are also things that bring me a great deal of joy. I connected with your poem and it flows. The overall effect is stunning with the visual topping your wonderful poem. Great job.
Perfection.
Wendy


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much Windy. I really appreciate the review and the nice stars.
    Beth
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Happiness
by BethShelby

Hello, Beth,

Great job with the entry for the
What Makes Me Happy writing prompt contest. I like your list of things that make you happy.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and comments.
    Beth
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Hello Bethshelby,
I pray all is well with you, as well as your family. I love the imagery of the colorful bubbles, which is always a happy place. This is an amazing rhyming poem of one's happiness, YOURS. I love the many ways and things you shared that make you happy. A lot of those things, also make me happy. It's well-written and makes me smile. Good job!! No errors. Nicely structure. Thanks. Happy writing:-)


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and the six stars. I enjoyed reading your comments. I'm so glad you like it.
    Beth
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Fantastic! Wonderful rhyming poem with so many things to be thankful for mentioned. I too am thankful for many of the same things, I think this is a lovely verse and a great contest entry.


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and the lovely comments
    Beth
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This is a wonderful piece that tells us that there is happiness along with sadness. It shows how one can choose to see the good over the bad and be thankful for all the gifts they have.


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and the lovely comments.
    :)
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This was a very nice read. You have documented the different elements of your happiness neatly and expressed them well. The photo was lovely too, I love bubbles!


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm glad you liked it.
    :)
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, uplifting and creative.
This uplifting poem shares many ways we can look at our lives and
be grateful. I enjoyed the read of this poem as it presents a positive
message.


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and nice comments.
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This happy poem, Happiness, has the required stanzas and reminds the readers to look for the things that make us happy. They are there and waiting to burst forth and push away what isn't so.


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and great comments.
    :)
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A good judge as to whether we are happy is knowing when we are unhappy and for the rest of the time we are happy and didn't really appreciate it. No one thing makes us happy, it is an accumulation of lots of things and it's when we look back on our life that we realise how lucky we were, the trick is to appreciate the moment when it is happening, here I think you did that, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much Dolly. I really appreciate the comments. Yesterday was the perfect day to write that poem. The temperature and humidity was perfect and nature was at its best. I felt very happy.
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