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Yes I guess anything can happen when breakfast cereal is running your country.
Enter the Fruit Loop brigade
You make an excellent point in this short poem.
I can only hope the Christians come to their senses and throw him to the lions haha
I am sure those big cats would gobble up a sugary treat disguised as a cheese puff quick smart LOL
Cheers P


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Great to hear from you - it looks like we've both been off the site for a bit. Hope all is well on your side of the globe. Over here, we are counting the days (117) until we can send Trump back to the narcissistic swamp he crawled out of.

    Thanks for the review!
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I'm so grateful for reading pieces like this... Beautiful senryu and I wish you have never had to write this one. Not sure what else to say. It's good to read from you!


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
    Thanks. Yeah I hope we're not still writing about him next year.
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It really is sad that our wonderful country is run by such a person like Trump. I completely agree with the concept/meaning of your poem. I would say keep writing great poems like this one, but I really hope nothing like this will happen to inspire you to write a similar poem. Still good, though!


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    Thanks for the review and the member cent pump - both too kind and both much appreciated
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He clearly has not read any of it. It was tragically amusing, a sort of tragicomedy to see his interview. When asked about a favorite book or psalm he said it was too personal to share. BS. This is all a distraction from his botched job on Covid.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    "tragicomedy" is a good word to describe this unbelievable phenomenon - thanks for the review.
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Hello, my friend,

I couldn't agree with you more. This is a very clever senryu about our political situation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is great too. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    Thank you Gypsy.
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I absolutely love the poem, but I would think about the title. I think it doesn't help us know what the poem would be about. I think this is the best one for this writing prompt I have seen so far.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    Thanks - I see your point about the title.
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Funny but not so funny situation -

if you'd read that book
you might not have tear-gassed folks
for your photo-op
Let's pray for peace. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    Thanks for the review. Never before have those of us down here envied you Canadians so much.
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I did not understand this poem at all, though I'm sure it's just my sense of being wrong enough about a subject I don't clearly know enough about. Good job still yet.

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    Thanks for the review
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Boy, he really screwed the pooch with this boneheaded move. Talk about backfiring! Meanwhile, Republican Congress people are claiming they can't comment on the incident because they weren't there--spineless sycophants. I hope we all remember that moment in November.
Best of luck.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    Perhaps the pussy-grabbing, porn-star-paying-off, birther-conspiracy-spreading, Russia-colluding, advise-people-to-ingest-bleach-then-pretend-you-were-kidding, president has found religion. But probably not.
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That picture of hypocrite Trump is so cringewothy! I don't live in America but whenever he comes on TV I end up shouting at the screen. Please GOD don't let him win the next election. His appropriation of the Bible as a political tool is an outrage to me. Your poem reflects my feelings to a T.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
    As is the case with the Constitution, whenever Trump has tried to talk about the Bible, it becomes clear that he has never read it. Thanks so much for your review.
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