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Our Time On Earth


Time is fleeting

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How true! We need to make the best of today since tomorrow is never promised. We don't always do that. Sometimes we worry too much about petty things. And those are usually things that we couldn't change anyway, out of our hands. My new motto is Don't ruin today by worrying about tomorrow!
God bless!
Patty


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The goal in life is to be better today
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very nice. I only wish every place was actually like this. Where we could live as you so eloquently paint. But, alas I fear that is only a beautiful dream. Human nature is what it is. At least, we can read good poems and imagine.

Well done.


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This was a very nice poem. I hope everyone reads it carefully and perhaps learns from it. We don't know how much longer we will be around, better spend it being kind.


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I totally agree with your sentiments. Karma is real and it needs to be sorted out before we depart this sickly planet. We have a Redeemer and the time is now. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the demise of planet earth.


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And everyone around you :) I always know when I select a work of yours, that I will be in for a treat, and you never disappoint. This is a lovely, uplifting write, expressing your beautiful philosophy ;) Thanks for sharing.


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I love this! Its really poignant. I work at a domestic violence shelter, and I feel like this would be a cool poster. Would you mind if I put it on one? I would credit you of course with your name as the author. I like how your poem flows nicely as well. Overall very good job with this little poem. It made me feel all the feels.


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Jaybird: great advice in your rhyming poem. We need compassion.
Add in loads of caring and sharing and no fights, we can live in peace.
Enjoy your weekend. flylikeaneagle


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Hi Jay. We certainly need more of this:

"Compassion for your fellowman,
presents a pleasing way to go.
Show all your friends you understand,
all the troubles that they must know."

Good write as usual my friend. : ) Bob


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I enjoyed your well written poem Jake.
My favorite stanza was:

Compassion for your fellow man,
presents a pleasing way to go.
Show all your friends you understand,
all the troubles that they must know

Compassion is always a way to go.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet


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I love your theme of using our time well here on earth. Our time is short and we need to use it for good. I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words and there is strong feeling of thinking about what we do.


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