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Light within

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Colin John
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Hi Ronni, I picked one of your poems that I could relate to and this one I can. That's not saying the others before were not worthy of a review but this one with the first two lines are where I am at, in the sense that you state fact and do not elaborate to get your point over with the remaining words,they just fall into place. "We are stars wrapped in skin" I have never heard it said like this before, so top marks for these. Kind regards Colin


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Well hello Colin!
    Thank you for enjoying and appreciating this particular, one
    of my particularly favored ones myself, if not being perceived
    too facetious. That 'We are stars wrapped in skin' comes from
    Zen philosophy studies and reading a most phenomenal book
    'The Hollographic Universe", which really gives such depth
    perceptions about our universe seldom explored or revealed.
    Thanks for enjoying this one and relatably. I am most pleased
    indeed! And thanks too, for the extra 6th star, sincerely
    appreciated and most uplifting.
    Very best wishes always, Ronni






reply by Colin John on 29-Jul-2020
    My pleasure Ronni and thank you for your comments, has to be a quick one as off with my artistic grandaughter of six to visit Colchester castle which is the oldest town in England, we are doing watercolour paintings and going to have some fun, a visting teacher at her school said: I have never seen a child at her age draw with such detail and she loves painting with me she is 7 next week so this is a birthday treat for her. Cheers Colin

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    How neat, and so touching
    you are doing this with her!
    Children are precious, and since she already has a
    budding talent, blessed be and let her soar with it. Art
    is a phenomenal talent to
    have, and by all means, do
    share her enthusiasm and
    adventure into it. Bless you
    too for being there for her
    as she explores it!
    Best wishes, Ronni
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Such a beautiful offering, my lady -- have always love the image of us being made from stardust or just of the bits of the universe divine! ;) Beautiful imagery and the making of daydreams -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette


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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Hi dear Yvette,
    Nice indeed is such an image to abide within us, sure helps to
    dust off the worldly ills and over spills of life's irrationalities.
    Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts dear, and glad you enjoyed. You share so much, so well and so charmingly always!
    Take care dear, take a break or two...smile, and cheers!
    Love, blessings, always, Ronni




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Welcome back and thank you for another encouraging post. I like the idea of being "someone's most precious star". Your title and parallel artwork selection were captivating. Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Hi Joan,
    Not gone, just pauses in between, but thanks for the welcome
    cheers. So pleased you enjoyed, and indeed, we are someone's
    most precious star, whether they know it or not, of we ever tell
    them they are. I am sure you are such a star to someone too.
    Take care, have a great week, and keep smiling at the stars!
    Hugs, Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 17-Jun-2020
    Thanks for the reminder to tell someone they are our "most precious star". More hugs- Joan
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The funny thing is, God had no use for these magnificent stars until He created Adam, then lit up the sky, I don't why He did, but He loves us, and He displays His love this way. Beautifully done Ronni, Blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    You are so right dear Roy, and for exactly that reason, He loves
    us! You aced this one so perfectly dear friend! Take care...
    have a great week, and take a bow for all your timely inspirations!
    Blessings, Ronni

reply by royowen on 17-Jun-2020
    Well done Ronni
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Aww...this is just SO sweetly pretty.
'Stars wrapped in skin'...how wonderful
is that thought?
We are eternal beings, and always will we shine.
Just beautiful Miss Ronni.
God bless...


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Hi dear Irish Rain,
    Thanks for your lovely thoughts here dear, and indeed, this
    thought is one that reminds us of our sublime origins and
    inner lights within us that we can keep aglow, whether as high
    as the sky, or wherever we are, and just sigh and smile at
    our blessings and divine designations. God bless you too!
    Have a fantastic week, and stay blessed.
    Thanks too dear, for that ever extra star, appreciate it and you!
    Love, blessings, Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 17-Jun-2020
    Love you too Miss Ronni...have an awesome week!!
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