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The Rose of Sharon


a contest entry

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roof35
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This is beautifully done and your faith comes shining through. You followed the rules and got in all the words. This is very nicely done. Your illustration pairs perfectly with your poem.


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
    Roof,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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With every breath in me this is a terrific
piece... So godly and sounds so perfect in
every word you wrote I loved it my friend


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
    Abby,

    Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and a six star rating, they are greatly appreciated.
    I pray you are doing well and keeping safe.

    Blessings...Portia
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The misuse of words like passion hurt those who want to apply it in the sense that is pure and sweet. The passion of a true believer,one who loves and appreciate the undeserved kindness of God the Father and Christ the Son of God,is one of the most beautiful and heartfelt emotions in the world. I feel yours through the wonderful words of your inspirational masterpiece.


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Nomi,

    It is always a blessing to hear from you. Thank you kindly for your review and wise comments, they are greatly appreciated.
    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Portia
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rjuselius
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This is a brilliant piece of poetry dear portia! I think you have managed to succesfully convey the essence of faith using a set of words which add to the read.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Rebekka,

    Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and best wishes. Thanks so much for that super-dooper squeeze, I needed it. Sending one you way💖
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Hello Pharp,
It's a nice piece of Romance Poetry meeting the required parameters, having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme plus lively imagery, and beautifully depicting Christ in various worth appreciating shades and colors.
2nd Stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Laudable Indeed!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020



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    RP,
    I pray you are doing well and staying safe.
    As always your reviews are always a blessing and very uplifting.
    Thank you kindly for the six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia

reply by RPSaxena on 20-Jun-2020
    Portia, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
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not a big fan of religious themed poetry as I am an atheistic Buddhist if there is such a thing. But regardless of the theme, i can appreciate the beauty, the rhymes, the flow and the images so well done.

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Jake,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Respectfully...Portia
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Patty Palmer
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Absolutely beautiful! You did great just getting all the words required in the poem. The whole poem are words that ring true!! Good luck with the contest~
Love and Hugs!
Patty


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Patty,

    Thanks so much sweetie for your review, very kind comments and beat wishes, as always they are greatly appreciated.
    Have a great day.

    Hugs...Portia

reply by Patty Palmer on 18-Jun-2020
    You're welcome my dear friend!!((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))
    Patty
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well done. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Raul,

    Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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You've done a wonderful job with your poem and contest entry. The Lily of the Valley is one of my favourite wild flowers and you have most poetically woven in the words required to illustrate your faith.

Very well done and a pleasure to read and review today. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Gloria,

    Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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Bobby Cunningham
 
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This is a lovely poem that truly glorifies God. The picture is really beautiful. The rhyming and the syllable count are Flawless and allow this poem to roll off the tongue. Really beautiful.


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



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    Bobbie & Millie,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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