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The Day of the Lord


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Comment by
Renée Purdie
 
 
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I felt the Holy Spirit speaking to us in this poem. We were created for "such a time as this" and I definitely feel your poem will help us get through these challenging times. I appreciate you also including Scripture to enhance your piece. Thank you for sharing your gift.


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Renee,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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Quirkydreamdiary
 
 
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This is an amazing piece. Very enlightening and gives you a lot to meditate and think over. Your vocabulary is really impressive,and I just love how everything blends and is really easy to get lost in.


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    My Friend,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...POrtia
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Y. M. Roger
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You are getting so great at adapting messages of Christian hope and reassurance into all of these various formats, my lady!! :) A wonderful Minute of proclamation for the contest -- almost seems appropriate for the opening prayer at Sunday worship! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Yvette,

    You are always so kind. Thank you for this uplifting review, very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day and stay safe and well.

    Hugs...Portia
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Amanda Louise Davis
 
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This is a well done minute poem. Your rhymes and syllable count works. I appreciated reading this one. It's also uplifting and positive. Nicely done here.


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Amanda,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated.
    Have a wonderful day.
    Blessings...Portia
Comment by
Cindy Decker
 
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Portia,
You've written an excellent poem with an apt photo. I love that Jesus will be coming soon, because there is little hope for our world without Him. The colors you've chosen for your poem make your work stand out even more. Good luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Cindy


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Cindy,
    Thanks so much for you review and kind comments. Cindy, I am looking forward to Christ return, the world is constantly changing and it appears not for the best. Yet, I will continue to pray and trust God.

    Blessings...Portia
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This poem certainly delivers a religious tone of embracing that the end is near, that one needs to repent and turn one's back on Satan and focus one's eyes on Jesus. A little too "end times" for me to fully embrace, but you write of it well.


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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Margaret,

    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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ameen786
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Yes my friend, looks like we are heading there....simple down to earth vocabulary delivering a powerful message in superb ryhmes; good luck!


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Ameen,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
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Elizabeth Vaughn
 
 
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Very nice piece. It is "thought worthy" and a little bit scary. I guess it shouldn't be scary, but comforting. Good luck in the contest! I enjoyed the poem and notes following it.


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    Elizabeth,

    Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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Janice Canerdy
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Your Bible-based minute poem is skillfully and creatively composed. Is is cautionary in tone, as is the Bible, which warns numerous times that He could come at any time!


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
    Janice,
    Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
    I pray you are having a wonderful day and doing well.

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Well done, minute poem, Portia, a format I like a lot when it's used like this -- best of luck.
I am still having so many issues with my pc when I am here I don't even want to be here a lot anymore. My apologies for scarce reviews!


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
    Dawn,,

    Thank you kindly for your review, comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings... Portia

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 16-Jun-2020
    You are most welcome!
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