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Those precious memories

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Haunting lines and very well expressedd feelings in your poem here, talented writer. These lines talked to me: "The memories of things now past, will linger on, hopefully last."


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Interesting poem on the love of a family. The rhyme and rhythm worked perfectly with your piece. Thank you for sharing your poem with all of us. ~Brenda


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Sometimes we just need to remember the good times. However, we can't get stuck in the past either. It's the thin line of knowing when to come back to reality. However, cherish those memories, that's why we have them :)


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Remembering friends and family is so important, especially during this pandemic,

Your love and sincerity for your dear ones exude from this poem. I hope you have shared this poem with them.

This poem is precious.


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With the current fears and chaos glaring us in the face--and getting worse daily--our memories of special times and people are especially precious now. Your poem is so well-written and touching.


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-Thanks for sharing the notes
and your poem, jaybird.
-I always enjoy reading them.
-I think memories are very
important, especially as we age.
-We often find comfort in them
since they are probably about
people we miss in our lives.
-The precious "thoughts are most dear."
-Very well done. Have a good rest
of your weekend, and a Happy Father's Day!


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You have captured my feelings exactly, in this wonderful well written poem. I feel the same as you have described, finding myself reminiscing about the past. This verse touched my heart. Thanks for sharing.


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Jaybird,
I would love to be the author of your poem above, then I would send a copy to all the people who meant something to me in my life's journey. The last stanza is so touching too. I never want to let go of the special people in my life.
Blessings, Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy,


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Yep, we do wish for more time to serve our families and neighbors. Memories are precious and the ability to entertain the ones we wish.
Well done my good friend. Hope you continue the memories of good.


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Hello Jake,
You've written another very fine poem with excellent rhymes.
Without memories, life would lose if tether to the world,
they can seem as real as the moment when they were created.
Excellent, uplifting poem.
Robert




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