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Busy as a Bumblebee


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  3 total reviews 
Comment by
zanya
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Just love it - a joy to read and reread !! bouncing along rhythmically full of silly moments and vignettes from life - such a superb visual to illustrate -got my vote in the contest


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.

    Blessings
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Mary Furlong
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When I want to know what's the buzz, I'll call on you. A fun poem with a nice bouncy rhythm. Suggestion: I remind him, "Hold your tongue." This hold s to the rhythm, and it shows instead of tells what happens. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
    Mary,

    Thank your kindly for your review, best wishes and you great suggestion, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...

reply by Mary Furlong on 20-Jun-2020
Comment by
Deepali Pradhan
 
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Very well written, suits the prompt. However, I feel that the line "there's lots of ranting, words that rhymes" sounds a bit unusual, may I humbly suggest " there's lots of ranting, words and rhymes " instead?. Overall a very good one


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
    Deepali,

    Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and suggestion. Your help and kindness are greatly appreciated. I have made the changes, it sounds better. Thank you!

    Blessings...
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