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A reverie

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BHWatson
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This is so sad. A lost chance of love lets loose waves of emotion that are difficult to reconcile. I think your poem does this well. I would suggest looking at punctuation use for your work. Unless an author is missing out punctuation deliberately for stylistic reasons, it is usually included. Good luck with the competition.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you for this review.
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Gert sherwood
 
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Ah, what a pathos poem in perfect rhyming. Your love poem is well done using the required words and in your authors note---
Nothing is as devastating as knowing you will not meet again with someone that you care for.
Gert


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you for your fine review.

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Jun-2020
    You are welcome unknown writer
    Gert
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A. Willow Bends
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You poetically defined devastation well. This is an extremely wonderfully written piece that is written in a brutally honest and somewhat painful vein. Are you sure there is NO way to ever make contact with this person?
With all the ways to track down people these days, could there be a chance if the person is living? Maybe you should investigate the possibilities. Never say never when there is hope still alive.
Wendy


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you for your detailed review and your generous interest. Indeed there is. Ancestry.com found him and we are in different countries. We are in touch by telephone and email often. The poem is set in another time, fifty years ago. Thanks for your interest. But, we haven't seen each other in 65 years, so we still think of our young faces, since the years are blind. If you check my portfolio you will find a few mysterious poems about a long ago love.

reply by A. Willow Bends on 23-Jun-2020
    My oldest son's father had nothing to do with him, claiming he wasn't father, blah, blah, blah, yet my son is the only who has inherited his Polycystic Kidney Disease. Odd huh?
    My son was better off without him.
    My new husband of 4 years, who is, of course, NOT biologically related, ended up being the kidney donor. A perfect direct match. Funny how things works out. My son did have a wonderful stepfather. I was married before and he treated him exactly he did our own son. I was very fortunate. Many are not. Blessing on you.
    Wendy
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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The loss of a loved one never to be seen again is heartbreaking and mind numbing. Not only the partner left behind, but also the children, parents and siblings suffer.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thanks for your thoughts. It was a young love many years ago.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 23-Jun-2020
    The hurt is not forgotten, and may be less sharp as time passes.
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I love poetry that rhymes well and this does. It flows off the tongue with no effort, and it touched my heart with sadness. This is a wonderful contest entry...best of luck.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you for such a beautiful uplifting review.
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harmony13
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The author's words are heartfelt, strong, clear and creative. I pondered
on the sadness these words convey. The author's description of feelings
was exceptional. The artwork compliments this poem well.
Hope you had a great day!


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Your review with its detailed attention is very much appreciated. Thank you.
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the places we visit with someone special to our hearts will always have the feelings return when we visit the same places without them this time.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Thank you for your review.
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This is a very beautiful poem, which I greatly enjoyed reading! You wrote it in SUCH a great way, without using the words you couldn't use! Good luck in the contest!

-Tanvi Pauddar :)


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    This is a very gracious review. Thank you.

reply by Tanvi Pauddar on 22-Jun-2020
    You're welcome! :)
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A reverie
Lost Chance

Hello, anonymous,

A nice entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. I know the feeling of loosing someone you love. It's awful. Well done.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Thank you for resonating with me in this review.
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June Sargent
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Beautiful piece that captures the essence of love that will endure, despite the knowledge that you will not meet again. Very touching and poignant. Perfect artwork.


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    Thank you for this very touching review.
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