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Huggie the Bear


Yesterday has gone, tomorrow?

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Good morning my old friend. Good to see you here on my return...So happy you are well....and what a clever little write, really like it, perfect for the child minus a few of the longer words. Very nicely thought out and executed.
I enjoyed it, and is better than meets the eye at first glance...good to read it twice.
Good work.
MY best wishes.
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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Welcome to the melting pot of imagination! Bless you for reading about Huggie. Good to see you back. Blessings, Kay XX
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Aussie,
I smile at dialogue of the cute huggie bear and Mum.
I'm glad that Huggie bear wants a bath so he can be hugged,
after his bath. That is one thing I miss is a hug from my dear friends but it's a 'no no' with this Covid19.
Good wishes for you in the contest.
Gert


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Hi Gert, Thanks so much for your happy review. We all need a care bear. Love, Kxx
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We are living in such crazy times. It feels surreal - I hate turning on the news, stand transfixed, shaking my head. I'm glad I have my dogs to hug and my youngest (a boy) still lets me hug him. I don't ask my teenagers... I don't even hug my husband as he is one on the front-line. He is sleeping in a bedroom downstairs - it is all so very odd! Poor Huggie, but a bath will fix him. I wish it was as easy as that!


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Hello Margaret, Thanks for reading, yes we live in a different world now. It doesn't look like abating. Take care, K xx
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Hi Kay. This is an enjoyable read on a hot topic. All of us can identify with your words. My suggestion for this piece would be to double space between speakers and perhaps use a different font for each so the reader would know who is speaking. Marilyn


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Hello Marilyn, Your suggestions are duly noted. How are you? Hope all is well in squirrel-town? Love, kay xx

reply by BeasPeas on 25-Jun-2020
    Hi Kay. LOL! Squirrels, indeed. I have them running around the yard. Marilyn
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Not hugging is difficult for some people to understand, especially children who like receive and give affection. This is such a cute story to tell children to help them understand.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Kxx
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Good luck with the contest Kace. This was great and most appropriate for children because it gave the honest truth, that I agree a high percentage seem to forget. Well done.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Hello my friend, thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed.Love, Kay.
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I enjoyed your dialogue only contest entry, Aussie. I love the unique approach of the boy and his Huggie Bear having conversation. You did a great job with the details of the virus in your talk. Your picture choice is adorable and a great match. This is factual and still sweet and personable. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Hello Jan, Thanks so much for your in-depth review. It's hard not to hug, something that comes normally to us. Some are still ignoring the fact it can kill. Blessings, Kxx
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Huggie Bears are important when someone feels unsettled and fearful...but, we still need to be wise and cautious. This is a super posting, Kay, for the Dialogue Contest and utilizing commonsense. Best wishes!! xoxo (Wish I had a six left!)


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Hello my friend, Thanks so much for your positive comments. I tried to reach out to youth, it is so important. Love, Kay XX
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Hi Sweetie Pie, everyone has to deal with this virus the best they can...whatever makes them feel save...that's what they should do...I glad Huggie Bear is doing his part...I love your poem of protection...very well written my wonderful friend...and I love your picture...take care...much love to you...Linda xxoo...

how are you doing???...and how is Toby Dog ???...I hope your both able to get out for your walks...I went to my girlfriends Saturday...and stayed with her over night...it was good to see her and her husband Keith...they are great people...wish I could walk over and see you...you both take care...love xxoo


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Hello Linda Louie! Thanks for reading and glad you liked. Toby is like a teddy bear (having a haircut this week) very cold this morning -0.9 degrees. Glad you are well and socialising. I was a little concerned for you, now all AOK. love, Kxx

reply by l.raven on 22-Jun-2020
    it's a bit warm here...in the upper 90's...I hope Toby enjoys his hair cut...and not to worry...I am fine...I worry about you...you take care...

    and you my wonderful sweet friend...are so welcome...much Love xxoo
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We all need a huggie bear in these trying times. Your words express the emotion that is felt during this age of Covid-19. Excellent dialog writing and best wishes for the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Hello Elaine, Thank you for reading, yes we do need hugging. Glad you liked and thanks for the good wishes. Love, Kxx
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