This was a very emotional poem to read. Life does have very difficult moments that we have to endure and your poem expresses those feelings in a powerful way.
Thanks for sharing your heart felt feelings in this writing.
Well done and thoughtful.
It is nice to put into words what is sometimes in your heart for a love one that meant so much to you and ask yourself, why. As you write each word you relive the time spent with this person.
I hope a lot of people will read this and good luck.
A beautifully written love poem for your lost love. The AABB rhyming is perfect and the pace is just like a rocking horse. I loved it, pity we can't leave planet earth together but you will meet again. Well done K xx.
It has been a while I know.
I love the words to your poem, they captured my attention from the first line to the last
I can feel the emotion with in your words
I understand how you fee, for felted the same way about my love.
Thank you for sharing cookie
Jay, I'm so very sorry for your loss. I understand that your wife died many years ago, but you still miss her sorely. YYou've written a lovely poem about your love and memory for what once was. Ulla:))