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Jesus' Love Made me Whole


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  35 total reviews 
Comment by
Willie P. Smith
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Exceptional
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Exceptional in every way. This could quite easily be turned into a gospel
song. It almost sings by itself. You should consider having it recorded to
music. Beautiful poem(song).


 Comment Written 27-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
    Willie,

    Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and a six star rating, they are greatly appreciated.
    I pray you are having a great day.

    Blessings...Portia
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nassus1957
 
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You were able to co.ply with requirements in writing a Kyreile poetic form. The bonus is the choice of the theme about the redeeming beauty of God. Yes, a sinner can be whole again and be a new person with God's grace. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments.

    Blessings...Portia
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Frank Jauregui
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Blessings and thank you for this wonderfully well written poem bout how Jesus made you whole. Funny, but that's the same way he makes all of us whole, when wee come to him by faith we are made complete in him. May the Lord continue to bless you in your new life in Christ Jesus.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments.

    Blessings...Portia
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Bill Schott
 
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This kyrielle, Jesus' Love Made Me Whole, has the proper formatting and acts as a testimony as to the power and grace of God.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Bill,

    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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ameen786
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I enjoyed your strong and beautiful reflections in your faith, indeed, as long as we have that sense of God's consciousness, we are at peace; superbly rhymed and great flow in the Kyrielle, thanks for sharing and good luck!


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments.

    Blessings...Portia
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Mary Hollingsworth
 
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This poem and the artwork with the arm raised is a combination of a Sinner's testimony of repentance and total surrender to God. Such a powerful declaration of your faith.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Mary,

    Thank you kindly for your review and comments.

    Blessings...Portia

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 28-Jun-2020
    Portia be blessed and may your day and week go well

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
    Mary,
    Mary God's blessings shine upon you and your family. Stay safe and well and have a great week.
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Wonderfull! This reads like an old timey Gospel song. YOu should put it to music!
The poetic style is spot on, from what I understand. And so is your message. :) Very well done!
I wish you the best in the contest. This deserves a win.
Blessings,
Deb


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Deb,

    Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and beat wishes, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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Liz O'Neill
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If only all people would read this poem and be challenge to examine their internal perspective. If everyone believe as you do, there would be no judgement, hatred, condemning, excluding. There would only be acceptance, diversity, inclusiveness, safety, love. Thank you. this poem could be an inspiration.


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Liz,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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Rosemary Everson1
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A well written poem that could be a song. Love the rhymes and the meaning that Jesus evidently does make us whole. The thought is amazing. He also makes us free from sin. Love Him.


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    Rosemary,

    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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MissMerri
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Exceptional
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Such a beautiful and spiritual poem you have shared. I also love how artistically it is presented. The message is excellent too. Your rhymes are consistent and pleasant to the ear. All in all, it is an excellent response to this prompt and will do quite well in the contest, I'm sure.


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
    MissMerri,

    Thank you for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
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