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I see and hear someone different

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What a fascinating subject for a free verse poem.

Am I an illusion?

Indeed! I loved your author's notes explaining this poem even further. It is quite an interesting thought to consider how we see and hear ourselves.
Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed it.
All the best,
Jan


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Jan, for a great review and good wishes. Go well.
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I look in the mirror and don't see me; I see my mother. I do identify with the words of this poem. I think we often do not see ourselves as others see us. Perhaps we are an illusion. You got me thinking. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank you for taking the trouble to read and positively review my free verse.
    If your mother were to stand beside you while you both looked into the mirror, then she would be even more like you.
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