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A smile, each mile

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Hello Jay,

This is some of the best advice that I've ever got. If the whole world was like what you describe, what a wonderful place it would be.

Take care and Happy Fourth of July...Bill


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Yes, it is all about perspective and attitude and making an effort to smile and see the beauty and good of each day. A heart-lifting poem and one that is like "an apple a day" helps keep the doctor away as it will improve our health.


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Wonderful advice, Jay. I liked this in particular:

"You'll find that smiles
may brighten up life's weary miles..."

And this: "It's good for mind and for your soul-"

: ) Bob


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Let a smile be your umbrella- a good old saying and you've used uthat thought well in your poem jaybird. Especially on the bad days its a good thing to remind us to try for a smile on our dial. Enjoyed, cheers


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Hello Jay Bird
What a great fun rhyming poem for us to read and enjoy
smiling, of how to rid a frown to a smile. Yes I agree that it's good for mind and for your soul-
Doctors agree, make it your goal.
Gert


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I consider myself a sort of Pollyanna. I always look on the bright side of things. I think that we should always wear a smile and show people that smiles are contagious. They say that laughter is the best medicine. I believe that's true too. I like your poem very much. I think it's quite accurate. Much love! -January L. :)


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I have found that smiles are usually contagious, whether you are standing in a long grocery store line or on a crowded bus, if you smile, most people will smile back. And, it even seems to relax your own face!


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I choose to smile. It is a great reminder to smile. It's simple and it's free. Great job on this. In the world right now, with all the bad, sad and depressing news, your poem was like a beacon. Have a great week. Gretchen


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Yes! I am always telling people how positive thoughts can heal you both emotionally and help you physically as well;-)

EXCELLENT job!

I appreciate and thank you for sharing this with us and may God bless you and your family;-)


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A great poem! I like the lightness of this one. I love the rhyme and rhythm with its bouncy way. I like Let your smile be your umbrella on a rainy rainy day!
God bless!
Patty


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


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