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Clutter


Limited space for burgeoning possessions

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
roof35
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You followed the rules and rhymed it, too. I think we all could stand to do a bit of "housecleaning." Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is nicely done.


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Your positive review is much appreciated. I spent so much time composing my 20 lines that I had to put on hold decluttering!
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zanya
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I can empathise with these common sentiments around the whole matter of clutter - we amass such large quantities - I am knee- deep in it at present myself trying to decide 'Which to keep and which to throw'- not an easy decision !!!! This poem has the makings of a classic & I don't have a 6 left this week- should be in winner's enclosure though!


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    I am touched that you think my poem is worth a 6. Thank you so much. I am now committed to decluttering!
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