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They Witnessed


Matthew, Mark, Luke, and John

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A poignant write here Raffaelina and believers find it hard to understand non-believers because there is great passion in what an individual believes in, but it is the right of all to believe in what they want. I enjoyed your rendition of this ancient story Raffaelina, a fine and poignant faithful write, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
    Your review is well received. It is true that those who feel a certain faith are passionate in their belief and not always understanding of others. Thank you for your view.
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The author's words are meaningful, descriptive, clear and creative. The author's gives a beautiful description of Jesus and his Apostles. I
pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork compliments this
poem well. Have a great weekend!


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your detailed review.
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A very well written poem about Jesus the teacher and leader of 12 disciples who sacrificed His life for all sinners who believe he has come to save God's children. He is God off love and many cannot accept His words are true.


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your lovely review.
    Some are prepared for the worst and shun the best. We can only be grateful for the gift of faith.
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You've said it all very well and summed the matter up beautifully. The last line is the clincher. They still don't believe. I love everything about this and the powerful and inspirational message conveyed in this. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful review. I love your words.
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This poem, They Witnessed, covers the idea that what we now read is what others actually were there to see. In modern times these wonders may seem to pale in the view of fiction, but still serve to save the world.


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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    I am pleased with your insight in this review. Thank you Bill.
    Ralf
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This poem about God is a good one, although I stumble through some of the lines because the flow doesn't work and it picks up again.
This could use some more tweaking and going over and over until the flow is effortless.

Good job!
I appreciate you for sharing and lots of luck with the contest!
God bless you;-)

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thanks for your detailed review. I appreciate your view.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 03-Jul-2020
    ;-)
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a powerful, yet true poem entry for the A Poem about God writing prompt. I hope it does well in the contest. Great good luck!


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your review and good wishes.
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Hello my friend

Wonderful entry for the
A Poem about God writing prompt contest. You stayed in topic and followed the rules well. The presentation is beautiful.

Nice rhyme scheme. The poem reads like a Sunday school lesson. It's really nice. Well done.


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your encouraging review and good wishes.
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I wish I still had a six star rating left to give you. This poem had everything I look for in poetry. It rhymed, made sense, is spiritual, and touches the reader emotionally. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Earl, your virtual sixes are in my heart. Thank you for this review..
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kahpot
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This is an excellent and very well written poem about God, your last line has a powerful ending with that question, wonderful artwork for this poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot


 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much for your accolades. Encouraging words are blessed words.
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