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Making A Friend


Brief and simplistic

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Rosemary Everson1
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What a beautiful poem about friends and friendship. When we are young many times e move away or our friends do; then we meet new ones. We always hope for a friend that is honest and will forever glow when we need them.


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Interesting use of this sonnet like form. With this simplified, straightforward language you speak of one of the most valuable things in life; friendship. And one aspect of making friends is communication. We need to share our thoughts if we are to make connections. estory


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TOTALLY OUTSTANDING poem that I really adored reading;-)
The poem flowed perfectly and was well written and congratulations on your RECOGNIZED and ALL TIME BEST STATUS!

Bravo!

I appreciate and thank you so very much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)


 Comment Written 07-Jul-2020


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It is simple isn't it, but sometimes hard to do if you are the one that's struggling. This is a lovely poem about not only being a friend, but accepting friends into your life and letting them know they are appreciated. Nicely said jaybird1
cheers


 Comment Written 07-Jul-2020


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Jay, I love this! Your pems are always such inspiration. You spread wisdom like a momma spreads mbutter on toast -- makes everything better. :)
One thought ...
new found >> new-found
Wonderful poem! I love every line.
Be blessed, my sweet FS friend,
Deb


 Comment Written 07-Jul-2020


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Whoa! It looks like you're taking a lot for granted from this hypothetical friend.
Hypothetical friends tend to be okay, because you can change your proposition for the hypothesis any time you want.
It's the real ones you can't count on.

Ogden (Don)


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Nicely done piece about the value of new friends and letting them know your feelings. I have been guilty of not telling someone I liked them until it was too late, so your words make quite the impression on me tonight. Good job!


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This is a very true and very well written poem about how to catch and hold a potential new friend. You used very good descriptive and true words my friend. I hope you are keeping well. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri


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Gentle soothing statement with touching elements captivating to my given interests, escape from a norm into a indifference, finding the wording refreshing to spirit. All views stated in my given opinion about this read.


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This is a very positive message. It is also so very true. We need to tell people that they make us happy. For this life is not meant to be lived alone, but with others.


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020


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