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The Centipede


A puzzlement

  4 total reviews 
Comment by
Sally Law
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This is so fresh and clever. I love the art illustration you chose for your work. I think you have a winner here. Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your kind review and good wishes, Sally.
    Ralf
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zanya
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yes we do need a little fun, a little something to make us smile or laugh and this helps to do just that - a centipede confused trying to figure out what is going on for him !!


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    As much as I hate them, yes, this does amuse. Thank you for your comments in this review.
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roof35
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This made me chuckle which isn't easy with 20 syllables. I also got a kick out of your illustration although I could not spot the centipede. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    That's the puzzlement too; the illustration. Thank you for your fine review. LOL..I like chuckles.
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Iza Deleanu
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I think you have a winner here. The poem is funny, witty and the reference that you throw in about the leg, makes my imagination go"octopus" - There once was a centipede
Lying in a ditch
Wond'ring
Which leg came after which
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    Thank you for your interest and comments in this review. I love hearing from you.
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