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We All Lay At The Crossroads

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Alcreator Litt Dear

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This speaks a human rights protection and practice message for we should not just kill on man's colour for we all enjoy equality irrespective of colours; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Thank you so very much. I know as a nation we are better then we think we are. It is only a few that makes it so hard for the rest of us. God Bless Stay Safe

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Diana Kane

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There is just such an honesty about this. A truth. It just speaks to me personally. I couldn't agree more with everything you said here. Absolutely beautiful. Well thought out and well said.

Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

Oh, thank you so very much, and you gave me a exter star God Bless Stay Safe Be safe

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Earl Corp

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If only everyone had this view point we'd all be ok. Your right, cops have no right to kneel on a man's neck. But there is more to that story, the cop and George Floyd knew each other, there was something more evil involved. Very nice job.

Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

It is not just the cops, most of them do there jobs without all the other bull. Thank you God Bless SS BS

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A wonderful and very meaningful poem about the nation laying at the crossroads. This indeed is the saddest part of our history, and we as a nation should unite and stick together.

Only together as one Nation can we
even hope to rebuild is great country
back were we all the same, equal and no
barriers of color and no damn border walls

There is a lot to do ahead, and you brought it out so well.

A masterful artistic presentation and photo.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. This needed to be said.

Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020

thank you very much, I am glad it reached out to you. God Bless SS BS

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