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Portia, This is such a beautiful and well written true poem from your great big heart of love for our Lord, Jesus Christ! I miss seeing you on here. I hope and pray all is with with you and your family. May God bless and protect you all! love and Merry Christmas! Teri


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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This is truly a beautiful poem, and so well constructed too. You've followed the restrictive rules without making anything in your content seem restricted. It flows smoothly and has so much meaning. I loved it. Oh, and congratulations for winning a prize too. Certainly deserved!


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020

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Amen! "Flawless doctrine reveals faithfulness!" I love that statement. Great job with this pleiades poem. May we all be feasting on the Lord's Word and fervently seeking His strength and peace. Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020

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Portia,
A beautiful poem about God's Mercy, love and grace.
God is faithful to us. We need to embrace him completely. Exceptional work, Portia. You write so eloquently.
A friend,
Blessings,
Cindy


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020


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    Cindy,

    Your review and comments made my day, thanks so much for your kindness and the six star rating. Have a great week.

    Love💖💖💖
    Portia
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What a truly lovely poem! I don't read a lot of poetry written in this style, but I am sure glad I didn't miss this one -- it inspires me to write one sometime! Very beautiful.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020


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    Dawn,

    Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating. Have a great week.

    Hugs...Portia

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 21-Jul-2020
    Very much my pleasure, Portia.
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Hi Portia,
This is such a lovely message about your title "Faithfulness." You used so many beautiful words that starts with a "F". Only if people would believe in the Almighty awesome power of God, things would change in their lives. This is such an awesome message of hope, love, mercy and grace waiting for those who get to know our Savior. Well done. Best of luck with this beautiful poem. You got my vote. Have a blessed day. Happy writing:-)


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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    Joyce,

    Thanks so much for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Thanks so much for your vote and blessings...

    Lots of love...Portia

reply by joycetreasures on 13-Jul-2020
    You are so welcome.
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How true these words are! This is a great and powerful entry for the Pleiades Poetry writing prompt. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review.

    Blessings
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Great is thy faithfulness, right?

Your poem reminded me of a lot of the feelings I had when I was religious.

Fervent, feasting, favor, flawless, these are well chosen, uncommon words, though they are a lot more common in religious writing.

I've seen several of these this morning. Contest entries. This is by far the best and I am zero percent religious. Fantastic poem!


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review.

    Blessings
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